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the beat is really calm and soothing...but the flow was like..rambling..and you sound real muffled, or far from the mic or some shit...but your intents were good...the lyrics are very very deep...i like the lyrics a lot, if you molded ya flow a little more this track could be so fuckin ill...cuz the message is no doubt moving...i feel shit like this, but the quality & sound was real shaky, but props none-the-less...nice work....
.peace. oh and could you peep my track..."Simplicity" its posted up out on the Song Page...thanks 1 |
quality was bad coz tha peice of shit mic i got,as i said it's not finished but when it is i'm looking for big things,thanx for tha feed.
Peace |
good piece..for a rough draft...keep workin on it man the lyrics were dope an the beat was good...put it all together be a #1 at 106 an park lol...juz messin keep it uop though man it sounds like it could be something with high standerds peace
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beat was nice n slow....lyrics were good...voice to soft..i understand the mic...i think u should..go buy a new one....and it would help this out alot.........cuz u had good lyrics...and a good meanfull song...CUZ U CAN ONLY BE UR SELF
lol...aight no dout though...nice job kid |
Be yourself...your from scotland, that dont sound like a scottish accent, flow wasnt 2 bad, lyrics were good ...........keep spitting.....
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Thanx for tha feedback peeps,i'ma havta tinker and improve tha peice to give it justice.
Peace |
Cryptic i'm not entirely Scottish dawg,thats why i don't have an Scottish voice entirely,Anyone else with comments ?
Peace |
The beat was mediocre bland.......your voice was too silent....Its kinda hard to understand what you were saying.....and the flow was a bit off.....
Thats my honest opinion.....I aint gonna lie....but Im not gonna call it bad...... Keep it up.....PZZ |
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