Tripology.. Camarac & FaZe²
 

Tripology

Originally a 3 man collab but the other person did not show...



Im so Sick and Tired of seeing my own Life Fade
ive Pay more Tolls then Death & still i havent Paid.
Ingulfed in Hate - im Gods one and only Mistake
so i Hide from those that made me disown my Fate.
im Building up Rage, i could Burst at any Moment
my Atoms part, because my death lurks Upon Them.
those Hurtful Comments - i feel im the Scum of Earth
i even despise myself. .my life has nothing, no Worth.
im blessed with pains Curse, im hated for Entertainment
marks on my soul, where those words En-Graved In.
never given a chance - no notions of Apologies
so I let my anger out here. .with in this Tripology


Im so sick and tired of being the Sick and Tired View in the Distance
that Persistant Youthfull Indifferent hidden below Truthfull Eclipses.
these lunar linguistics from the God seen odyssey of our Tri-Pology,
are offering a Bargain Plee in Anonymousity to be-rid of the Poverty.
Honestly, i could Count My Blessings with One Hand, rule of thumb
Youth unsung gettin into the Swing of things, w/ a crystal Pendulum,
That Fuels The Sum of this Alumini, to the Human Eye, i Design Fate
Mature with Age like a Fine Wine, walking this Time Line til it breaks.
Primate Descendant placed Rhyme to Sentence and forgotten respect
creating a Positive Effect, they who Seek the Peak of the Opposite Sex
Often whats left is unwanted love, many hearts broken and following,
and Your the joke Their Swallowing, as Love completes our Tri-Pology.

Damn....very good i like it..
faze ure getting better..
u got the right person to teach ya..
Camarac that was Ill.....

Thank you very much Bribe, i did get the right teacher. Im glad he puts up with my shit :)

yeah that was a nice ass piece my niggas.

favorite bar

never given a chance - no notions of Apologies
so I let my anger out here. .with in this Tripology

hot flow.

Yeah no doubt, this shit was off the hook dawg, I liekd the wordplay, but your ryhme scheme needs work just a few touch ups dawg and youll be TIGHT, overall you can elevate dawg, but seriously, this was some nice shit...

thanks for the reply for my shit dawg.

Uppin This Sheeit . .

tight piece,vocab was ill,imagery was vivid, structure was on point,wordplay was ill, all in all i give this collab a 10 out of 10

my favorite line(s)

Nice :)


Good flow, nice concept.......overall good piece :)

Specially liked this line/begin...

Im so Sick and Tired of seeing my own Life Fade
ive Pay more Tolls then Death & still i havent Paid.

Props :) Pz

^^ Thank You . . Uppin This Ma Fucka !

Im so Sick and Tired of seeing my own Life Fade
ive Pay more Tolls then Death & still i havent Paid.
Nice Line
Ingulfed in Hate - im Gods one and only Mistake
so i Hide from those that made me disown my Fate.
Tight
im Building up Rage, i could Burst at any Moment
my Atoms part, because my death lurks Upon Them.
nice
those Hurtful Comments - i feel im the Scum of Earth
i even despise myself. .my life has nothing, no Worth.
Coolness
im blessed with pains Curse, im hated for Entertainment
marks on my soul, where those words En-Graved In.
Nice..
never given a chance - no notions of Apologies
so I let my anger out here. .with in this Tripology
Nice..


Im so sick and tired of being the Sick and Tired View in the Distance
that Persistant Youthfull Indifferent hidden below Truthfull Eclipses.
Nice..
these lunar linguistics from the God seen odyssey of our Tri-Pology,
are offering a Bargain Plee in Anonymousity to be-rid of the Poverty.
Nice..
Honestly, i could Count My Blessings with One Hand, rule of thumb
Youth unsung gettin into the Swing of things, w/ a crystal Pendulum,
Nice vocab
That Fuels The Sum of this Alumini, to the Human Eye, i Design Fate
Mature with Age like a Fine Wine, walking this Time Line til it breaks.
Nice Flow
Primate Descendant placed Rhyme to Sentence and forgotten respect
creating a Positive Effect, they who Seek the Peak of the Opposite Sex
Nice..
Often whats left is unwanted love, many hearts broken and following,
and Your the joke Their Swallowing, as Love completes our Tri-Pology.
This was coolness right here best part in ya verse..

This was a good open mic piece there were no flaws so keep this coming mang 1..