Rainforest (Short Notebook Piece)
 

.:Rainforest:.

Resamblin life,
Beautiful but still treaturous./
Silent and save,
But olso filled with danger./
Quiet, peacefull,
but al by al its still restless./
Dirty and ugly,
Filled up with controversial hate./
But still pure,
By its inner beauty./





















Its a few lines, kinda.. Poetry, no hardcore hiphop :)

ayo i think this belongs in the poetry forum holmes

Lol i forgot we got that here :)

My bad^^

Somone move this

true, shit does belong up there.... lol...
by the way, I liked the little concept here, this metaphor thing witheh forest... sounds aight...
Make it a bit longer, and this could be a nice drop for the poetry section...

peace

Blah!


Wrong place uppin/move this someone

Move this to poetry Somone

Up^^

Pff

This was pretty good...

Kinda sonnetish/haikuish...

But very smooth.

Definately poetry.

Makes it sound as if you've been.

All yall Go Here and reply :)
Short Poetry Verse
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82655

thnx btk^^preciated

[ Moved to Poetry ]