Kursed Lyrically vs COM
 

5 bars
you spit first
i set up
no c h dr votes

*proper breakdown please*

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CH-CH-CH-CH-CHeckiNG IN
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Mentally-Kursed Has Just Been Sent-To-Rehearse
The Only Grip You Got On Rap Is On Ya 50-Cent-Purse
I Disperse Punches Frequent… You’re Already Punch-Drunk
You’ve Lost Your Hunger Like Xzibit Fucked-Up At The Lunch-Truck
In This Punch-Up You’re Dumb-Struck, Coz I’m A Vandal
The Only Strap You Own Is The One On That’s One Your Sandals
Like A Candle I Burn You, From The Top-To-The-Bottom
Drop The Full Weight On Kursed When It’s My Job-To-Spot-Him
Pinkslip You When Night-Falls, And How Could I Fail?
I’ll Prise Out Your Eyeballs, Coz Rap Battles Ain’t Brail
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aight ill spit in a lil bit

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Aight check it

Youll never be a hard hitter like baseball players playin wit bats made of cotton//
Ill leave you "underground" like "prehistory rappers", not mentioned and "forgotton"//

Punches leave ya wig split and bloody like pussy penetrated for the first time//
This bitch "copies styles" like "fashion model mimes", eatin your stomach inside like swallowin chime//

Ill leave "CAPS" in your brain like "shiftin" your thoughts and "hittin" your "I's"//
Your test tubes are tied, awaitin a organ transplant, sorry, were out of supplies//

Bruise "marks" from "books" torn pages from scripts pierce through your brain so your "book smart"//
Ill rip you limb for limb and part for part, you had a penny for a chest, not anymore you had a change of heart//

Spit toxins leave you "Vaporized" like "Vicks" then sent to "Falcons in Atlanta"//
Leavin your heart "pace" wit a "miller draft" like bein "picked 11th" then shipped to Indiana//



Explainations:

Michael Vick
Atlanta Falcons
Vicks Vapor rub medicine
Bookmark
Push shift and I itll be capital
Reggie Miller was drafed 11th and pacers

This wasn't the best of battles but nonetheless heres the breakdown

flow-com
punches-same

...No worpdlay or meta's...well not worth mentioning

I'm going to give my vote to COM because his flow was tight throughout and kursed didn't seem to beat him in any catergories...kursed your lines were a bit played...

Vote-COM

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Mr. Sandman has a firm ass grip on this battle...

Everyone's sleepin.

This was a tough battle to call.
I'd rather have stayed away from it but both slingas have asked me for my thoughts so...

Kursed takes the wordplay and metas...

Com takes the flow and punches.

Both ignored personals...

That would have been a good tie-breaker type thing.

I'd like to judge this on opener and closer...
But I really hated both of them from both slingas.
Didn't like the forced rhyme on the "purse" line...
Thought the "prehistory" line was weak as hell on the other.

Tough battle, cuz you guys are way, way, way fuckin better than this here.

Giving it to Com cuz he made me laugh with his sandals line.

That was the highlight of this whole battle for me.

Sorry, don't mean to beef, much respect to both of you guys outside this ONE battle.

Peace

my vote gos to COM because he flowed more and his puches made me laught more and Mentally Kursed streched his lines.

my vote: COM

CLOSE BATTLE.......

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Flow - Tie
Complexity & Vocab - Mental
Metas - Tie
Personals - none really
Multies - none really
Punches - mental
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vote=Mental

voting mentally kursed...........................very very very close battle..........actually read this one about 4 times........and heres my conclusion..........

Punches - Tie
Flow - Tie
Complexity & Vocab - Mental
Personals - none really
Multies - none really
Metas - Tie

so................Mental
Vote ^^^^^^

^^ I HAD NONE MULTIES??????
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i don't like to bitch but thats just plain bullshit
I'll post my verse again and highlight the multies with quotes and
you can see whoever wrote that coudlnt have read my verse

"Mentally-Kursed" Has Just Been "Sent-To-Rehearse"
The Only Grip You Got On Rap Is On Ya "50-Cent-Purse"
I Disperse Punches Frequent… You’re Already "Punch-Drunk"
You’ve Lost Your Hunger Like Xzibit "Fucked-Up" At The "Lunch-Truck"
In This "Punch-Up" You’re "Dumb-Struck", Coz I’m A Vandal
The Only Strap You Own Is The One On That’s One Your Sandals
Like A Candle I Burn You, From The "Top-To-The-Bottom"
Drop The Full Weight On Kursed When It’s My "Job-To-Spot-Him"
Pinkslip You When Night-Falls, And How Could I Fail?
I’ll Prise Out Your Eyeballs, Coz Rap Battles Ain’t Brail

blah blah blah fuck the long breakdowns.....

flo-com
structure-com
punches-com
structure-com
vocab-com
overall-com

this was more of a one sidded battle...

Vote:COM

i think com took this, he had his multis and his verse was flowing straight the whole way through, and he had punches

I Disperse Punches Frequent… You’re Already Punch-Drunk
You’ve Lost Your Hunger Like Xzibit Fucked-Up At The Lunch-Truck

^the best one out his vere,pretty hot

metally, your bars were pretty streched, kinda fucked up da flow, like there was shit u could have taken out to make it sound better, but u also had punches that were good\

Spit toxins leave you "Vaporized" like "Vicks" then sent to "Falcons in Atlanta"//

^but that alone was like da best one out of your verse

good shit though

vote-com