Pointless Writing.
 

Pain Leaves Hearts Chased, Half Paced.
Decisions In Haste, Life's Merely A Waste.
Utterly Cold, You Watch The Tears Unfold.
Secrets Told, Feelings Bought To Be Sold.

Fake Emcees, Start Claiming The Game.
Dont Work, Cant Be Proclaiming The Fame.
Rb, I'm New To The Site, Cats In Spite.
Cuz A Slight Emcee's Jacking The Light.


Short Shit..

short, to the point...
good and right on point

sorry feedbacks to small but its just that it was overall good... reminds me of someone but whatever

if you would be so kind
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81183

TO SHORT FOR THE POTENTIAL I SEE IN YOU HIT ME WITH MORE

Decent piece i thought, it was short but it got the point across i think, flow was good, try adding some more multies, but other than that it was good