tido193 vs. WeRd-smith
 

10 lines/5 bars
no dr
no crew votes
no hate votes
no feeding
drop at the same time
no whining

checking in.................


this little noobie bitch thinks he can go toe to toe wit me
but really his verbal clip is unloaded oh its so empty
i know your moms personally tido so don't tempt me
simply put this guy is wack my verse is wasted
tido put me to the test? then obviously i just aced it
one line and i've got this guy in deadly convulsions
watch as his own kin pull back in utter revulsion
his rhymes lack movement set for disasterous expulsion
i'm not hating just saying how it is and always will be
this ain't a battle he's nothing i just recited a soliloquoy*


*might be said wrong.......in a play it is when you are thinking out loud

hurry up and spit

sorry so long

i can see the future, even the past or present,
smith try's to come against me, but now he's full of resentment,
your in my premonition, but i can see it that ya doomed,
cause your rhymes been wac since you dropped-fell out the womb,
you still think you can take me to? bitch you must be fadded,
the only time listen to ya is when i'm highly sedated,
now look at what you created, thinkin that your tupac when ya not,
you like a bong but instead you takin "rips from a cock"
cause ima mind fuck and your heads looking kind of pregnant,
oh your brain farted and its shiting out your mouth in segments,

good battle, good battle. Pretty equal but I believe that Werd won this marginally. Better punches and wordplay, but only just wins.....................................But I cannot vote yet, I'll be able to vote soon.

^while input is appreciated if you do not have one hundred posts please do not vote..........upping for real votes

punches - tido
flow - tie
multis - ...
rhyme scheme - ws
personals - ...
vocab - ws
metas - tido
wordplay - ...
complexity - ...

vote = tido
originality - tido
creativity - tido

well this was a short battle but it was tight,i was feelin tidos punches more, i liked werd-smiths vocab,both had good rhyme scheme,but i was feelin tidos verse more.

my vote--tido http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=80560

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=81010

can yall hit my battles up.thnks.~1~

tido took this only because he had punchs good shit by both but ya both still needs to elevate yall will get better vote tido and please hit this up honestly thanx



http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81085

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i suppose i should up this for something like votes fucking one hundred character rule it really should be less...........

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this was a pretty good battle, both had good punches, but Tido had better punches, both had good flow and wordplay was alright, but i liked Tido's verse overall, so my vote goes to Tido

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