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Minipulate
What does minipulating do?
Rearranges the natural mind and derranges it from tactful maligns Things seem practical inside but equatoins of mathematical lines Don't define reality yet thinks you've sanity when really you ain't Like picture puzzles minupulated thoughts aren't nearly as faint It distorts the normal restraints that actions have upon others It's used to cover instincts so there distinct confilct won't bother May not think...but they're impoverish believing media coverage It detracts ideas and subtracts gears and sends plots too shrink That other wise wouldn't sink... Why do people do it? For domination and control to take concentration to unfold The designation of roles in the modern life that we're all told And expected to fol-low and to make us beleive we're hollow Goverment aims to work in communitys but we're a mono But no too stand alone...Minipulating people to appose this Super mods should close this cuz i'm minipulating in my spits Theres the twist you no i'm knot...yet want to overpower Confront those who tower us, bring minipulation to devour There power...Think about it!!...We'd be nothing without it Not too say everyones about it... Now y'all know...I'll bring you the basics through complexity... Potent has spoken |
nice drop man. nice use of vocab and some good multi's. ur rhymin scheme was pretty tight to. I think ur second verse was harder then ur first but overall it was a good piece.
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Yeah, this wasnt a bad piece, a decent topic - pretty original, flowed ok for me, good use of multi's and internals, nicely structured, i liked the writers voice, you really took a hold of this topic and directed it well, nothiung id really quote but i felt the piece as a whole, i liked the end part too `bring you the basics through complexity` that was pretty creative.
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I liked this peice, it was a good read i thought, your multies were good, and your peice had good flow, it had good structure, and it was a good topic, keep dropping, and if you get the chance check out one of me and Gene Pools Collabs, thanks.
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you only upgrade pop i knew you was gonna be vicious just needed to brush up a lil this was a great peace pop
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Officially my favoruite Emcee here...
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Um...maybe some exagerrated props there
But... Thanx & Up |
ok, I ain't been here long.
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Nice nice nice nice nice
Vocab Tite , .......nice words u used here, ..... Flow, it flowed like a ship on the ocean Concept, ..real nice, .....not played at all^^ Don't define reality yet thinks you've sanity when really you ain't Like picture puzzles minupulated thoughts aren't nearly as faint Dopeness Structure was nice, ...and all by all a real nice piece Props Olso From Duckie :) |
Niiice piece dog. Flowed real well, easy to read. Love the topic, manipulation is everywhere, so I felt this shit. Good vocab, and some nice lines.
Goverment aims to work in communitys but we're a mono ^^ True, True Keep droppin Po. |
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