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pot1ent 09-23-03 02:48 PM

Minipulate
 
What does minipulating do?

Rearranges the natural mind and derranges it from tactful maligns
Things seem practical inside but equatoins of mathematical lines
Don't define reality yet thinks you've sanity when really you ain't
Like picture puzzles minupulated thoughts aren't nearly as faint
It distorts the normal restraints that actions have upon others
It's used to cover instincts so there distinct confilct won't bother
May not think...but they're impoverish believing media coverage
It detracts ideas and subtracts gears and sends plots too shrink
That other wise wouldn't sink...

Why do people do it?

For domination and control to take concentration to unfold
The designation of roles in the modern life that we're all told
And expected to fol-low and to make us beleive we're hollow
Goverment aims to work in communitys but we're a mono
But no too stand alone...Minipulating people to appose this
Super mods should close this cuz i'm minipulating in my spits
Theres the twist you no i'm knot...yet want to overpower
Confront those who tower us, bring minipulation to devour
There power...Think about it!!...We'd be nothing without it
Not too say everyones about it...


Now y'all know...I'll bring you the basics through complexity...

Potent has spoken

Gene Pool 09-23-03 03:01 PM

nice drop man. nice use of vocab and some good multi's. ur rhymin scheme was pretty tight to. I think ur second verse was harder then ur first but overall it was a good piece.

check out mina and masta c's drop called "2 of a kind (feat. Masta C) leave some feedback thanx in advance.

Baron Mynd 09-23-03 03:27 PM

Yeah, this wasnt a bad piece, a decent topic - pretty original, flowed ok for me, good use of multi's and internals, nicely structured, i liked the writers voice, you really took a hold of this topic and directed it well, nothiung id really quote but i felt the piece as a whole, i liked the end part too `bring you the basics through complexity` that was pretty creative.

Props. :)

Menik 09-23-03 03:38 PM

I liked this peice, it was a good read i thought, your multies were good, and your peice had good flow, it had good structure, and it was a good topic, keep dropping, and if you get the chance check out one of me and Gene Pools Collabs, thanks.

pot1ent 09-23-03 04:39 PM

Thanx

pot1ent 09-24-03 10:13 AM

hOlla

WORD~PERFECT 09-24-03 10:16 AM

you only upgrade pop i knew you was gonna be vicious just needed to brush up a lil this was a great peace pop

Funn DementaLL 09-24-03 11:43 AM

Officially my favoruite Emcee here...

('Pot1ent').

pot1ent 09-24-03 02:56 PM

Um...maybe some exagerrated props there

But...

Thanx & Up

Funn DementaLL 10-02-03 08:48 AM

ok, I ain't been here long.

pot1ent 10-02-03 04:27 PM

: )

Edicius 10-02-03 05:43 PM

Nice nice nice nice nice


Vocab Tite , .......nice words u used here, .....
Flow, it flowed like a ship on the ocean

Concept, ..real nice, .....not played at all^^


Don't define reality yet thinks you've sanity when really you ain't
Like picture puzzles minupulated thoughts aren't nearly as faint

Dopeness

Structure was nice, ...and all by all a real nice piece

Props Olso From Duckie :)

Formula 10-02-03 06:16 PM

Niiice piece dog. Flowed real well, easy to read. Love the topic, manipulation is everywhere, so I felt this shit. Good vocab, and some nice lines.

Goverment aims to work in communitys but we're a mono
^^ True, True

Keep droppin Po.


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