Rhetorical Insight: Week 6
 

Made sight, Gold and Velvet divided, seperating Day and Night
the chalice Holds my imagination, who am i to Say whats Right?
Painted sight . . pained in sight of a Dawn breaking our Dreams,
A knotted oak. . thus symbolising the Tie's in Our Family Trees.
The manderin glow as the Sunsets. . colliding w/ a Blue blanket,
As the Shadows Silhouette, Overpowers the Light of Madness.
Conjoined at The Soul of this Piece. . an Explosion Of The Two,
the Combination of God and Satan centered by the wise of youth.
Colliding Views of Green Scenery, the scene lighting my Instance,
i see the Face of Mother Natures glaring at me from the Distance
a Malicious smile spreads her face, laughing at the Blaze of blue,
The time when Day becomes light *vice versa as the sun fades from view. .

Now why does everything you drop just have to be dope... can't you act like you are human once in a while....lol

nah, but that was a really nice piece man... everything was on point... flow, imagery, everything... & the pic fit into the verse perfectly... overall ill...

you suck

tight drop man. ur description of this picture combined with ur rhyming skills made this come to imagination. for a short piece I was feelin it. not much else I can really say cuz everything in my opinion was to perfection. again tight drop so keep em comin.

and if u have time check out mine and masta C's collab "2 of a kind" and our new one I'll be postin shortly today called "nice guys finish last (feat. Masta C)" some feedback would be much appreciated thanks in advance. peace.

Yeah this peice was a good read, i enjoyed it, your flow was good i thought, and good use of multies also, good vocab and wordplay, it was just a good peice overall i thought. it was a strong peice.

Ehhh, it was keyed up, it wasnt that good.

Um well...

WOW...

..geez, lets start

Um...

We get banned for one liners but not one words cuz that all i gotta say

ILL