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toxik VS 69!big_pimp!69
10 linez max
no dr no hate no crew no feed u spit first |
yo negro
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.............im so glad u think that...........................
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k i'll spit first
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ya, no shit dumbfuck,......................................... ..
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.... ..... ...... ..... ... .. I'm a pimp, he's my hoe if he don't get my money fast i'll be throwin him out my front door/// This fag can't rap the only thing he can rap(wrap) is the x-mas presents at his shity job at that shoe store/// Hes probly one of thos computer freaks.. siting at home masterbating all through the week/// The day he gets a girl is the day i'm out in some farm trying 2 sell sheep///(wich that will never happen cuz i'm a P-I-M-P!!) Fuck this fagit he looks like a lizard/// I no this for a fact.. saw him trying 2 get some dude up the ass while i was pimpin my bitches, in that 1993 blizard// Man this guys also a poser... saying he can do triple back flips snowbaording in that following winter/// But the only thing he can do is complanin about what happened and how he got his blisters/// I'm done with this fagit.. i think i'll go find my bitches/// I'll let him be olane as he twanks of in the kitches when hes itchen/// your turn ... BIOUTCHHHHH |
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Fa real bitch, jump of my dick, and get outa here trick//
Before imma have to "scratch out" anotha name off my "hitlist"// "Infamous quotes", da only shit comin out dis "cut-throat"// Dats why all u katz readin my shit, got 2 da 4th line,....and allready choked// Ya flows is as smooth as "sand-paper", and ya punches is "hallow"// This kat says he spits hard on da mic, heh, nah dawg,....he only "swallows"//(sucks dick) Shit, i dont even gotta go the maximum and beat yo ass, dawg, u wackin up my style// Id quit now but, and undefeated record looks good in my profile// weak as hell just to let ya no |
give us some feed back
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aight fellas i feel sorry for ya cats coz noone will vote coz ya newbs but i'll make exceptions...........
breakdown:- big pimp=not bad but the struc(dunt matter really) and flow really affected ya verse but i liked tha originality a lot.........praise toxik=ya on tha right trax but ya need |
Toxik got this with more harder punches and somewhat creativity
an iight battle elevation needed on both sides Vote = Toxik 1 |
aight fellas i feel sorry for ya cats coz noone will vote coz ya newbs but i'll make exceptions...........
breakdown:- big pimp=not bad but the struc(dunt matter really) and flow really affected ya verse but i liked tha originality a lot.........praise toxik=ya got all tha right stuff there jus need to elavate ya punches so that the other rapper actually feels offendeed overall=bp coz all the origanality came frm him...........peace ya'll TOXIK= toxik=ya on tha right trax but ya need |
alright... lets get some more votes!
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let get some more votes!!!!
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well damnnn 45 views but only 2 votes... come on
fuck this 100 word shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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