The name Jahaira
 

Ok when I did this Poem My friend Jahaira asked of me really not to think. She wanted
Me to script off the top of my head, the ideas I get when I mention her name...So this Poem isn't complex but to me it is very good...Please give input critque.

When The name Jahaira is said....

Sweet things come to my head-Your smile the way me and you clown-How we go into deep conversation, left wanting more.When the name Jahaira is said-the first image that comes to my head, is your eyes. The way you look at me makes me shy-When I look at ya number in my cell- Laughter and sweetness rings bells.One of the first things that comes to mind. When thinking of you I say damn shes fine. From what I see your intellegence can challenge Mines. I truly think of fun things we can do in due time. Strong and competitve a women who is beyond the average head. Not shallow not even fake. A lady staying true to herself realizing the definition of Race!
Someone when I look at I can sense depthness. Someone who seems to strive to be a perfectionist. A women who knows what she wants. Funny how you said Ur trying to achieve the altimate Nutt!! A bug out, women with respect. A person who is very careful who she selects. A women with great taste. To behonest you remind me of someone that is apart of me. That's why I can relate (Hint). When your name first comes to mind-
To be real I say to myself, You are the mystery that I know longer need to Find!

lol iunno but sounds like more then a friend.....this piece came off wit a um....hot feeling....sort of maybe a respective idolizing....like....keeping respect for her in describing her beauty

the imagry u throw down is sickness man it really is nice....good job keep writin

damn... we seriously need to collab..like now
upping the IJL

oh yea.. this was ill, images had me like WOW

Ty guys...

"the imagry u throw down is sickness man it really is nice"
Shizzle... Ty I do try...

More input please..

laterz..

i think i know her... Jahaira from flatbush? be singing and stuff? holla at me let me know

^Lol i felt like the imagery in this was crystal clear and i can relate to the feeling lol sounds like either u were tryna butter her up or u only "say shes just a friend", dont get "the vapors" man lol 1luv.

Lol ty for input....Nah she isn't from flatbush....

Laters...

You kept on using 'women' instead of 'woman'. It might have some personal relevance, but i didn't see it. Maybe it's cos i aint looking hard enough. Merely the surface.

Anyway, i like it. Poured out with feelings (both directly and indirectly). It was simple, but in a very good way. I held strong all the way through.

...resp...

nice