16 bars of pointlessness
 

this is just a pointless freestyle i made......really just looking to get some feedback and constructive criticism....

i bully foot rappers, pull guns, drop and shoot backwards
bring max payne to all these wannabe actors
kill emcees, spread the blood like cheese on crackers
i keeps it grimy, live in a sewer and you still cant outshine me
always stay slimy, with rhymes that come out at 90
miles per hour, watch as these emcees get devoured
i'm running this shit just like a control tower
but back to the matter, fuck this aint got no topic
wack ass rappers need to drop the mic, grab it up, "yo i got this"
spit hotness, lyrics leave you unconscious
fuck man i gets it hopping, like a jack rabbit
new nickname crack, hard to kick like a bad habit
but its on and poppin and you cant stop it
i keep it moving just like a clock hand....(*tick tock*)
watch as i crush your dreams like a pop can....(*crush*)
god damn, have you wondering when its gonna stop man....(never)
plus i'm hot kid, lyrics used for cremation....(burn rappers)
coming after emcess like death in final destination
rap aberration, get ya lifted like levitation
getting ready to rule rap, go ahead, prepare my victory celebration
all ya'll emcees coming up short like an abbreviation....uhh
ya'll not hot, i get it crackalin just like pop rocks
shut ya'll down just like i was a cockblock.....(na none here)
get a stop watch, your death is coming soon
*beep beep* there goes the alarm clock....(times up)
its time to merk you, got rappers stayin in the house like its past they curfew
hard headed motha fuckas better let my lyrics soak through
fuck around find ya ass floating in the ocean like a boat do.....(ya heard)...(*blup blup*)
ya'll cant beat me and ya'll cant join me
ya'll dudes is garbage, heard better lyrical content on 'me so horny'
and contrary to common misconceptions, i'm the one, the lone exception
pickin off emcees one by one like an interception
so you better watch out cause i'm coming for ya'll record deals
cook up in hells kitchen, serving emcess up like they was hot meals....yea


hit me up with some feedback....

wasn't feelin ya flow, wot was ya topic..................seems like ya is bitter towards others who write.............................

LESS OF DA HATIN..........................PEACE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!

next time choose a topic and stick to it

Strong finish... was intresting 2 read. Feelin' it!!!

thanks for the feedback, uppin for more....