Satans World
 

We call it nature but satan caters blatant ill behavour
We should pray to satan in doing a favour to be a savour

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All the bad events that prevents us from living happily
Gods for saking, its down to satan the ruler of humanity
All people are in shanty towns and the majority of earth
Satan is hardcore in the underground, we're gods at birth
Living ontop of the earth...We have the power of gods
Natural disasters and failed marriages devour our pods
Or maybe satans power interfeared and joy disapeared
Friods theory of death feared was really satans is near
So satan can't be steered clear of and will encounter him
He's living on hills giving kids pills, need mounteneers whim
To kill him...Oh didn't i tell you...those plans fell through
How do you think pain and suffering became part of you?
It's true he is everywhere...our chances, concious and all
When looking at stars we see a different satan enthrawl
Your skin will crawl next time you see the night sky, im right
Satans ways are to ignite scornful hate, be impolite and fight
I'm too busy suffering to finish to write this...
Now look at satans world and think about it

That is all class...You may be dismissed

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Stop upping you little hoe, if you want me to reply, reply to one of mine = )

This wasnt bad. .
topics been done many a time before, flow was decent, good use of internals and multi's, i didnt really like the finishing bar, it didnt fit in with the context of the rest of the piece, but the top half was pretty dope, i liked this line a lot:

^ That was pretty dope, good word choice, flow was pretty much onpoint, all in all not a bad piece.
Props my man.

Reply to mine - 'Lego Life' from the SS league = )

hmm where do i start.. this was good, flow was good
mutlis lacked in my opinion, the vocab seemed good but a few looked forced
overall this is still a good drop

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