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Sweet Sauce vs Born To Kill
Rules:
No D/Q No Crew No Hate SPIT A.S.A.P DONT TAKE T O LONG 10 - 20 Lines Explain Your Votes 125 Posts ~ and UP , Too vote U spit first No Pre-Writtin Spittin Bullshit holla |
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I'll have something in just a few. Good luck to ya... And may the best verse win. |
Him:
Biography - Thug-Freestyler-King-Dealer Location - Chi-Town (Humboldt Park) Interests - Rap-Weed-Pussy-Guns-Cars Occupation - Dealer My verse for him: Tryin ta rep Chicago but all ya doin them is harm... Worse than that fuckin cow, that started that fire in the barn.* Think ya Thug with that 'King Dealer' bullshit... Swipe money from a blackjack table, closest you'll get to it. Intrested in a little pussy? Must keep alot of pics of yourself... Cuz no bitch could measure up, not even a female elf. Only 19, and ain't makin it ta twenty... Have ya dyin multiple deaths, you RB's version of Kenny. Cuz like Target or a supermarket, ya rhymes made for average guys... Never once been above it's why ya unheard of like swordless samurai's. Gotcha like a shackled epileptic the way ya 'fit to be tied'... Cuz ya flow smooth like a booted car that's trapped curbside. You's a combo of childhood sleuths, a real 'Nancy Boy'**... Who couldn't construct a decent verse if ya wrote em on clean Tinkertoys. Ya just flaky like a croissant and ignored like 6 am mass... So I'll write ya eulogy with a Mont Blanc, only way ya be described with class. *The Great Chicago Fire was started by a cow kicking over a lantern **Nancy Drew + Hardy Boys = Nancy Boy |
nice spit nigga...
Sorry for takin so long i was doin sumfin.. Battle Record: 55-57~not tryin to jump ahead~ but the moment u accept u was defeated~ Only way to win~is if u was like those 'Who Wants to be a Millionares' who cheated/ you throwin all those weak 'jabs' so u harmless~ i could throw better 'punches' if i was armless~ cryin is if yo hillbilly ass was 'harmless'/ saw your content~so i deminished it~ have yo ass screamin more then Rodney King~screamin "Im Innocent"~ you winnin this~Hell No~Hang yo lungs like shoes n wires in the Ghetto/ since yo ass is geeked~you should kno bout dis last line~ In 'algrebra' its the only time Born To Kill~carrys the nine/ 55-57~Game ova~Like an irish man~neva forget yo four leaf clova ;) lol... DUN SLEEP ON DIS |
Fuck i mistyped:
In the 6th line under Armless it should be Farmless lol Battle Record: 55-57~not tryin to jump ahead~ but the moment u accept u was defeated~ Only way to win~is if u was like those 'Who Wants to be a Millionares' who cheated/ you throwin all those weak 'jabs' so u harmless~ i could throw better 'punches' if i was armless~ cryin is if yo hillbilly ass was 'farmless'/ saw your content~so i deminished it~ have yo ass screamin more then Rodney King~screamin "Im Innocent"~ you winnin this~Hell No~Hang yo lungs like shoes n wires in the Ghetto/ since yo ass is geeked~you should kno bout dis last line~ In 'algrebra' its the only time Born To Kill~carrys the nine/ |
I'd have to give this to B2k, honestly I think this shit was one sided
No offense but I thought sweet sauce disses came soft and didnt hit so hard lil breakdown Flow = B2K Punches = B2K Multis = None Metas = B2K Wordplay = B2k Creativity = B2k vote = B2k hit this battle up wit an honest vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81251 |
sweet sauce had a sorry opener...disses were ok...you had nice set up for punches but they did'nt land that good..be more creative with'em..ya last line woulda been a killa but you don't really carry shit in algebra..
b2k had a sorry opener also.. after that he compleltely tore in ya ass...punches were good..disses were betta..he got weak at tha last bar..overall better verse tho vote b2k.. |
Ok... This Was Way One Sided... Sweet Sauce Took It In Every Category...
.. . .. . .. . .. . .. . Nah... Just Kidding... Born To Kill, Didn't Even Really Try... And He Took It... Sweet Sauce... You Had Decent Punches... But They Just Didn't Really Hit... And The Rhyme Scheme Was Really Basic... Just Work On It More And Elevate. And Don't Focus On Dissin The Record Too Much... That's What You Did Here. Vote= Born To Kill. |
The votes are much appreciated...
Uppin ta get a few more. Can I get an amen! Not sure what I just meant by that... |
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2nd Uppin...
Can I get a few more votes in this general direction. Would like to close this out today if possible. Thanks for helping. Drop ya links, all the regular. Thanks Peace |
i think b2k took this here are the reasons
punchs b2k connected well the other kid was decent but not good enough wordplay b2k multi's b2k structure tie complexity b2k vote b2k and hit this shit up wit an honest vote aight holla http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81679 |
Flow = B2K
Punches = B2K Multis = None Metas = B2K Wordplay = B2k Creativity = B2k vote = B2k simple as..........sweet sauce was nice but due to the research b2k did b4........he owned it.........nice spit dawg hit this up..................... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81596 |
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