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Verballistic Insticntz take my skills and quadruple/
Light and Dark changes your soul and variations in your pupils/
Ill-lusions my presence alone causes confusion/
Breaking in the game like an everyday intrusion/
Believe-me its easy your bestman acting cheesy/
The smiles behind your back. both friend and wife are sleezy/
The town talks while you walk but your walk is of pride/
But the reality of the game is its a shame and you should hide/
One minute you're a star, the next your suffer from neglection/
Only one to turn to is your reflection for protection/
So you await in the dark no longer one-with-the-sun/
but son-of-the-gun the outcome is to run-or-be-done/
The room is getting smaller and so the walls had close-th/
You can either be claustrophobic or fight to oppose-it/
I'm eminent you spice girls are cinnamon and feminine/
Get into the mic like Twix, and step on eminems/

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