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COM Vs OUTWRITE
10 lines, we drop together
I'mma kill this racist fucka talkin bout WHITE POWER and fuck black people i'm white and even I think he's a asshole |
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This Is A Toss Up Like Salad; You Got No Meat-In-Your-Sound
And I’m Still Way Above You With My Feet-On-The-Ground I Sleep Well When I’m Dreaming Coz I Sonn-You-In-The-Clouds Yeah This Guys A Vet He Sticks Thermometers-In-Cows I’m Proud To Scream Aloud I’m White And Spite This Fucking Coward OutWrite Aim’ed Me Tonight Quoting “Fuck The Blacks… White Power” This BOY Can’t Rhyme Or Shave And I’m The Man To Show-Em Ghost Writing Doesn’t Mean Post Your Dead Grandmas Poem Lightweights? I Throw-Em, For Every Played Line I Deduct-Ya You Can’t Move When I Cut-Ya Like An Alien Abductor |
OutWrite Productions...
One More Tiiiime,.. Check It Com You Act Like r A Big Shot And Goin Places But Ur Crew Couldent Get Signed If I Autographed Ya Faces I Needed Some One To Merk, Im So Glad I Found You Call My Punches Mom And Dad Cuz When They Hit It Grounds Yo Watch Me Turn This Dude Over Like A NewBorn And Beat His Ass Cut Out Ur Spinal Chord, Give It To Ur Crew So They Got Ur Back I Can Tell Ur Weak, And You Dont Wanna Beef Wit Me In The Streets But The One That Comes After RB Dot Is The Only COM We Need No Beef....Just Music |
Com You Act Like r A Big Shot And Goin Places
But Ur Crew Couldent Get Signed If I Autographed Ya Faces I Needed Some One To Merk, Im So Glad I Found You Call My Punches Mom And Dad Cuz When They Hit It Grounds Yo ^^^pure illness Watch Me Turn This Dude Over Like A NewBorn And Beat His Ass Cut Out Ur Spinal Chord, Give It To Ur Crew So They Got Ur Back I Can Tell Ur Weak, And You Dont Wanna Beef Wit Me In The Streets But The One That Comes After RB Dot Is The Only COM We Need ^^^best part outwrite won this with better punches overall... com had a decent verse but it wasnt up to par with outwrite's... better flow also... good battle vote = outwrite |
iight..
Flow - OUTWRITE Punches - OUTWRITE Werdplay - TIE Creativity - OUTWRITE Complexity - TIE Personals - NONE Multies - COM Vocab - COM Metas - TIE Consistency - OUTWRITE iight...outwrite won this wit betta punches overall...COM's verse wuzn't at all bad..juss wuzn't as good as OUT'S...nice battle VOTE - OUTWRITE |
i thought COM took this....
COM's Verse:nice punches.....nice wordplay...structure was good...nice flo...overall he had the better verse Outwrite:punches wernt bad but were played...ur structure was good..flo wasnt bad..overall ok verse outwrite has some played concept in his verse and com had harder hitting punches Vote:COM |
Hmmm...Pretty Nice Battle Here...
COM Came Out Aight...Tossin Salads...PLAYED!...Multi's Seemed Forced But You Did Produce A Few Decent Punches... OutWrite Had A More Original Verse...Couple Played Lines...Had Nice, Hard Punches In Ya Verse...Thats What Won It 4 Ya... Good Battle... Vote - OutWrite |
Com You Act Like r A Big Shot And Goin Places
But Ur Crew Couldent Get Signed If I Autographed Ya Faces I Needed Some One To Merk, Im So Glad I Found You Call My Punches Mom And Dad Cuz When They Hit It Grounds Yo ^^^pure illness Watch Me Turn This Dude Over Like A NewBorn And Beat His Ass Cut Out Ur Spinal Chord, Give It To Ur Crew So They Got Ur Back I Can Tell Ur Weak, And You Dont Wanna Beef Wit Me In The Streets But The One That Comes After RB Dot Is The Only COM We Need ^^^best part outwrite won this with better punches overall... com had a decent verse but it wasnt up to par with outwrite's... better flow also... good battle vote = outwrite Choo dis man outwrite is sick no hate http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...28&pagenumber=2 |
Com You Act Like r A Big Shot And Goin Places
But Ur Crew Couldent Get Signed If I Autographed Ya Faces I Needed Some One To Merk, Im So Glad I Found You Call My Punches Mom And Dad Cuz When They Hit It Grounds Yo Flow - OUTWRITE Punches - OUTWRITE Werdplay - TIE Creativity - OUT Complexity - out Personals - out vote- outwrite.....1 hit this up.....1 http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=81382 |
Outwrite got this battle outright...he had some bad ass punches, personals and wordplay...he had some sick lines that made me laugh and his punches hurt as well...Com didn't come that hard in the battle, and he coulda done better...some of his punches didn't make sense...
VOTE=OUTWRITE |
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