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OPEN-MINDED v.s. Rappad
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no bullshit votes. both verses due within 30 min after check in good luck |
Where you at rapp-ad?, your 30 minutes is up!! LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Ya Flows Are Outdated Get A Slogan Jerk
Before I Rip You Quicker Then A Hulk Hogan Shirt Leave Ya Ruptured, Having This Sucker Suffer With His Body Spaced Apart, Like The Solar System Structure Wow, Open Is Worse Then A Dissapointment To Herbs You Couldn't Have A Point To Your Words If you Put Your Mouse To Join Your Words Open's Carcass Was Found Secluded In A Coffin He Witnessed The Power Of The Tools I'm Using often I've Beaten You So Bad It Seems Like I Have A Cavalry I Guess Open Must Be Mad Since His Post Count Resembles His Yearly Salary |
30 minutes exactly herb.......and in fact your 30 minutes are up , rules said check in immediately.
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LET'S GO:
You posted up a fake RAPP-AD- this is your first rhyme in your RAP-PAD// 29+26 equals 55 times you've been lost in a CRACK-LAB// (29-26=WINS AND LOOSES) Consume this situation by me droppin your heart to your stomach- thats the only way you can beat your beef// he couldn't rap if he was in plastic- your fake like Whitneys teeth// Your like the measles destroying your life for facts// i'm like a nucleic acid tract decapitating your carbohydrated fats for tax// My anger is enclaved so i guess your death is claustrophobic// I bring killer calibur power components to this opponent-that'll have him doin backflips like monkey gym aerobics// FINISH HIM: I'll surgecly go in your veins so your heart can depart the ocean// The only time his RAPPS been smooth is when he gave an AD for victoria secret lotion// DONE |
VOTES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!THANX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!
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Ight, this battle was okay
breakdown Ya Flows Are Outdated Get A Slogan Jerk (wack) Before I Rip You Quicker Then A Hulk Hogan Shirt(ehhhh decent) Leave Ya Ruptured, Having This Sucker Suffer (average) With His Body Spaced Apart, Like The Solar System Structure (!!!!) (nice shit) Wow, Open Is Worse Then A Dissapointment To Herbs(just a flow) You Couldn't Have A Point To Your Words If you Put Your Mouse To Join Your Words (not bad) Open's Carcass Was Found Secluded In A Coffin(just a flow) He Witnessed The Power Of The Tools I'm Using often(.....and?) I've Beaten You So Bad It Seems Like I Have A Cavalry(fairly decent) I Guess Open Must Be Mad Since His Post Count Resembles His Yearly Salary(not bad) rest of Open's verse was fairly decent i'm like a nucleic acid tract decapitating your carbohydrated fats for tax// (nigga, wtf u in? Chemistry class? honestly, i think only nerds would drop a punchline like that lolol, no hate) and it made no sense, acid....fats....TAX>>>>> where that come from??? Vote = Rappad for an overall better verse hit dis battle up with an HONEST VOTE http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81559 |
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flow + structure=rappad punches=tie origanality=open wordplay=open metas=rappad muti's=? overall=rappad.............just about tho.....props to both hit this up................cheers....... http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=81309 |
You Couldn't Have A Point To Your Words If you Put Your Mouse To Join Your Words
^^my bad the last word should have been verse not words, but w/e first time uppin 2-0 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
Personally I thought this was an Ok battle...Rap I've seen u come harder than this....Anyway OPEN MINDED u need to shorten up those extended lines, fucks ya flow all up.......Other than that u have some good concepts...But I gotta give this battle to Rap for better Punches Flow and overall enjoyability..
Vote = Rappad Hit My battle up wit Alpha Bet would ya? http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81512 Also Peeps the one in my sig 2 against ThugsDoCry l l l l V |
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second uppin now..... |
uppin for the 3rd time vote up folks
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i think rappad had the more creative disses...punches hit good...he had a weak opener tho...that hulk line is really played like {99}ha ha lol!! but anyway...overall nicest verse
open was a lil to basic on disses...punches was kinda soft..did'nt cause much of an impact...some lines were forced...it was iight but not good enuff for tha vote! vote rappad |
aight i thought rappad took this but here is da break down
flow even punchs rappad wordplay rappad multi's rappad structure rappad complexity rappad vote rappad |
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