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OLI DOGVSMR. Spits
no crew
hater or d/r voters no quoted votes fully explained appreciated no feedoffs no biting no freeposts do befo 3:00 eastern time and use spit first holla |
yo ok,
yo so im going set this shit rite of and drop it, at school gettin bullied was your only topic, if you were a baloon,u damn rite ill pop it, i got an mack 10 to your face dont make me cock it, battleing this bitch it aint going to be a fight, cus hes just like his asshole, full of fuckin shite, i aint going to back down,yeh sure im tight, oh yeh speaking of tight so was your mum last night, so as i finnish ill say goodye to Mr.spits, i just blazed you,like my crew blaze up the splifs.1 |
his occupation is a (chef) on his profile
opener............. im gonna be cooken up a full ~MEAL~ for this ~KID~ cause this bitch ~SPITS~ wack ~SHIT~ cause he does and knows how it ~FEEL~'s to toss a ~SALAD~(get it spits wack shit lickin a asshole) hasnt ya ~INSTRUCTOR~ ever ~TEACH~ ya not to play wit ~FIRE~ ya stupid ~FUCKER~ im spittin flames and keepin ya out of ~REACH~ but im spreadin quickly and gettin closer ya gonna be gettin burned cause ya startin to per~SPIRE~ finisher...... im throwin my punchs wit full force have layin on da floor motionles like ya have no ~CARTALAGE~ cause ya punchs are week ya couldnt maken any worse even if ya got dropped in the ~GARBAGE~ |
aight we need some votes holla .................................................. ......................
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get voteing.be honest............................................ .................................................. ................................................
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Spits wussup man I have seen much better;
Here it goes originality-spits flow-oli dogg complexity-spits punches-oli dogg multi-oli dogg vote - Oli Dogg Thats just my fair and honest vote no hate. |
thx man.upper.lets get sme shit up on da poll.1............................................ ...................
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aight mr.spits took this:
rhymes: spits flow: spits creativity: spits .... .....i guess experience............. OLI_DOGG ur spit was not bad but u played too much...next time be harder and do hot punches! peace! |
Decent battle, nothin to write home about though....Breakdown
Punches: Spits Flow: Oli Multis: None Creativity: Spits Vote = Spits |
no doubt that was a waste of vote to oli he wasn't hot at all i dunno this just caused spit a ko damn ya know damn well spit killed this cat oli had no punches just text thrown as mumbo jumbo that sounded like a middle school freestyler ha yo Spit u got my vote son hollaz
vote for my battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...6754#post796754 |
Very basic and elementary verse from Oli...
Spits came ta kill and he did. Better punches, better wordplay, and more complex verse from Spits. Oli took flow and multi's, but those really don't win battles. Sorry, nice effort, just elevate with wordplay, dog. Peace |
mr spits took it wit word play and everything........nuff said
vote-mr spits.................................. |
Yo This is how I see it
Punches= Spits Flow= Oli Multis= None Creativity= Spits Vote = Spits Yo hit my battles up homey http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81324 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81356 |
aight we uppin holla .................................................. .....................................
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break down
punchs spits wordplay there was none multi's spits flow oli complexity blah structure blah vote spits |
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