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Dark_illusions v/s Hellbound
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no crew no hate no d/r u must spit first |
my metaphorical expressions will tear into ur intestines//
dropping more knowledge then a moreman school of peseansts// my best rhymes leave u breathless, ya neck twists and legs twitch// direct hits connect straight lines like tetris// Illusions brings cancerous sickness to the surface of your epidermis // Have you parting with a broken spine’and lost respect, leaving with no-back// you sum fake ass dealer with a plumber is the only time he can show-crack // U’re a display of a Hip Hop misuse,// the Alfred E Newman of RB..nothing but MAD issues!// Hell bound couldn’t wRAP if he was tryin’ to preserve a dead Pharaoh’s skin tissue// Truthfully, dawg after a viagra kick you’ll still be on the short end of the stick// This kid’s gay so all I need is a pussy, to fend off this dick// |
^^ Aite shit
No personals...cuda been a prewrite.. just a bunch of wak punches wasnt feelin the outro too much intro was coo Good shit for a newb no doubt u prolly gunna take this But u fukin suk kid elevate use sum personals throw summulties in there dont rite like a paragraph an just have the last words rhymin ..thats why your a newb Have you parting with a broken spine’and lost respect, leaving with no-back// you sum fake ass dealer with a plumber is the only time he can show-crack // ^^ best line u had only lines that had potentiol to win the rest looked like weak jabs original yea but weak..soft... ill vote when other kids drops.. ... |
who da fuck do u think you are?????? Jay z.....tupac....biggie? i dont need ya fuckin input till afta he drops and ur votin...so stop swayin da votes u bitch
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yo dowg iz u gonna drop or what?????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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can i get a no show?............................................. ..dis cat aint even show up for da battle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!
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No there are no wins for no shows. Sorry about that but it is the sad truth, so read the rules and you will see.
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Yo dark illusions ima shine a light on ya past...
Back when u couldn't move let alone type so fast... You say im a "no-show" wats up wit ur patients... The way u dropin sounds like u have gotten complacent... Like your favourite food youre a chicken tryin to get the vote for a "no-show"... Truth is ur a fat fuck eating pie, watching re-runs of the powerpuffgirls, playing wit ur "mojo"... Dont' make this personal, but in truth its ment to be so... If ya eat any more, your gut will burst an your ass wil ova flow... I suppose you always chat shit, to lower the pressure, ease the tention... Your a fag, evry sunday u get fucked in "hedges" and raped by "benson"... Dawg your sick, u need to get your self to a psychiatrist quick... Shit i bet its been at leat 50 yrs since a bitch has seen ur dick... If your dark illusions...im the pure bright light... I used metaphoric fusions...u didn't put up a fight... ........... ITS OVER |
^^^^^^^^^^^^^hahahahaha, it took u like 2 days to write that? uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!
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I think Dark Illusions took this one by far......Hellbounds verse was just too play kind of mother goose like
vote=DI |
[2]uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Yo shut the fuck up
my computer crashed an im on a mates now u had a weak verse no real punches man uppin for votes |
yo personnaly i think my votes gota go to hellbound because in dark illusions verse it was jus the same ol shit that i have heard time and time before jus regujitated in a diferent way although his verse was good i feel that hellbounds was better
hellbound stop it wid the bad attitude to other ppls input vote: hellbound |
yo...dark illusions u can be in Diamond Mindz now..juss post sayin i sed u can..(in tha chat)..u can elevate nd shit..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/for...000&forumid=147 |
yo hellbound i think your verse won by far.
illusions rhymes were weak. yo if i could vote it would be hellbound |
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