HowY... Potent Raps
All my life it seems i been trying to catch up
And now, raps come, I just don't give a fuck Got an obsession with rap and now i've posession of facts On how a profession extracts and no more depressing math Of excessive bad-ness and sadness that seeped into my life I'm now heard when i reap the mic not having discrete hype Hardening glasses...cuz i've concrete sights on containing joy Is it just a silly game to entertain boys? or a theory of froid Battle words in convoys to survive death or to imply im best Either way, It's suiting all the needs of the theory of minds Weary to find the routings to suceed to breath another day Discover how to say lyrics with rhythm uncovering unforbidden Maybe i was wanting to be a father at 14, sonning and winning Wouldn't be lucky to be a father cuz of how many is nowadays So i'll keep it away!!Have authenticity so the census cower-away Raps given me relentless power to spray in projecting literature Deals=Polotics was revealed to late to escape from being sinister Damn..I'm now aiming to be prime-minister instead of hip hop Shit i Forgot... HowY...Seems like deals ain't about mic skills nor passion of rap But...I see popular playas only there cuz of fashion and contacts Shouldn't be bout that!! |
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im gona have to go offline so ill give a propper oppinion in a bit blud......
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ive witnessed mass elevation from you in the short time that ive known you..i remember when you had NO flow whatsoever..and now, upon reading your recent works, ive come to see flashes of magnificience. this flowed beautifully, never lacked content & was superior to most of the current open mics. however, at some points it seemed as if you were rhyming words just to rhyme them..it was as if they lacked meaning..but, despite its few fallacies, this was overall an enjoyable read.
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Dez said exactly what i wanted to say..Props man. |
rep aNb in sig dawg,anyway good use of vocab,flow was good,multies,a message,overall real good shit,and i also wanna back up what tha others have said,u have elevated alot and now i wanna colab with you dawg,hit up our forum.
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yeah this peice was pretty good i thought, it was a good read also, you had good vocabe usage, your flow was pretty good too, your multies were good, overall id say it was a good peice, keep dropping.
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