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pot1ent 09-25-03 04:03 PM

Growing Up(feat. Mental Methodz)
 
Mental Menthodz first time on open mic
decides to hit up wit Potent...It's an honour

...

Kids growing up in their own domains
With their unique throwns to maintain


..::Potent::..
As a tender teenager it feels like we need to aspire
Aim higher, but have too bare it when i receive satire
I bleed the desire to have entire control of my dreams
How can I?When drinking alcohol dissolves my gleam
Indulge in fiends, but anable to live up to expectations
Wishing to die!! then later in life have a reincarnation
Desperation fills young minds to steal funds to survive
This is mine...To stop re-enacting what fills your eyes
Plagiarized is only to the fullest...everything else isn't
Pretending to be a comic hero saving the world alone
Not learning we need to co-operate and not get stoned

..::Mental Methodz::..
Growing Up In a World Full Of Many Paths But Which Is Right?
A Blind Site Of What Really Goes On Including Everlasting Fights..
As a Junior I Tryed So Very Hard To Adjust To The Happening Style
Walked A Mile Looking For More Outcasts My Current Profile...
What Does The Future Hold For A Person Who's Almost Lost His Mind
A Punch Through My Chest Ive Got No Hope.., The Latest Sign
I Declined Friends I Trust Nobody But Myself, I Jus Regained Health
The Person I Called Friend, Stabbed Me In The Back For Wealth!
Years Later As Im Growing I Spread Emotion And Decide To Imput Trust
I Was Wrong He Jus Wanted Me 2 Deliver Stuff, The Battles Lost...

We're All Kings

Roots 09-25-03 04:05 PM

Just So You Guys Know.....This Is My First Open Mic Ever So Go Eazy Pz

Bigg E Z 09-25-03 04:12 PM

LOL...it was dope....i thought it was a shame that they were so short.....

anyway....id love to see a topical collab off u 2...

back to the point..flow was dope....2 diffirent ways of flowing from ya.....

vocab...dope...

rhyme scheme dope...

it was an easy read...i liked it...peace

west 09-25-03 04:35 PM

^word aNb still dominating open mic eh.

Peace Fam

Menik 09-25-03 05:02 PM

This was a good peice i thought, it was a good read, your flow was good, your vocab was good also, and your rhyme sheme was good as well i thought, Overall it was a good peice i thought, Keep Dropping.

Roots 09-25-03 05:26 PM

Thanks Upin.............

pot1ent 09-26-03 02:25 PM

Up...This turned out really well...Considering we only hit this up over aim

Menatl Methodz... :) ...Dope

Roots 09-27-03 03:24 PM

Upin.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..............


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