my blast
 

im the guy known to cause the explosive effects that blast in your ears/
the blast from speakers blowin out the holes in your ears/
makin people deaf and cant hear outta anywhere/
never dies out like its a disorder that cant be taken care/
it has side effects that affect that cause diseases that are permanent/
these rhymes i send are so dirty it gives you ear wax/
this shit brings in a bunch of cash stacks up to the moon/
but soon it will be burning the core and flesh of any person/
maybe this shit will give you a learnin/
you should pay attention to the text that i write/
any day and night it will knock out your sight and turn out the lights/
your blind that affects your mind cause it blocks the way the path that you are destined/
but nevermind all this shit/
all im sayin is you go agianst my blast you gonna have to quit/

critique please