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EyE4NeYe 09-26-03 07:04 AM

Whatever It Takes(fuck you)...(yes you)
 
Yo....
Im'a Do Whatever it Takes.....Exploit tha Cleverest Fakes,
Achieve a Level'er Place......Have Choice and Effortless Jakes,
Then I could Breathe in heavenly grace.....Rap wit Poise Like FeatherLess Weight,
It's A Miracle Like a Century Straight.....Of One Moist and WeatherLess Date,
Tough as Leather is Fate......Rough but Better is Hate and Enuff is never on ma plate,
I'll have ya Neck Severed than Rotate....Sum Excorsist Shit but it came Together to Flow Great,
Insane Letters that Go and Escape.....Stabbed by S's and sent to Hell by and H,
And I can't tell why is Great......A Hidden Gem like Jewels in'a Crate,
But I'm Out Now Fools and is Great....... Let's See what You bout now in'a Duel Witta Snake,
King Cobra type ta strike i adjust tha wait.....u pop shit but your wife leave u in busted shape,
Movin' a Rusted Rate, Why'd You Trust Tha Bait wen even youself is Such a Fake?.............

**~SynText~** 09-26-03 07:07 AM

um niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee


had good flow and vocab liked the rhyme scheme to and how you used the saming rhymins scheme all the way threw...

over all vocab and worplay was there......7/10 mics

Otherwordz 09-26-03 07:23 AM

yes indeed...the flow and multi'z were on point...and the verse is like COM'z dick...short but it gets the job done...LMAO!!!!!! j/k

WORD~PERFECT 09-26-03 07:40 AM

***I DID NOTHING TO YOU**********
runs away in thong crying!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

WWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEE

NAH TWIIN NICE PEACE I LIKE IT ALLTHE WAY THROUGH.
ITS LIKE KING'S DICK THOUGH TOO SHORT NO ONE WILL JUMP ON.

Otherwordz 09-26-03 07:50 AM

^^^man...bitchez gotta suck my dick with open armz...

Otherwordz 09-26-03 07:51 AM

^^^what the fuck did I just say?????? Anywayz...it's almost 7am now so I'ma try to get my insomniac ass to bed after I hit these sleepin' pillz right quick...

COM 09-26-03 08:09 AM

this verse is like kings dick, you could've cum harder, and next time finish the job

Otherwordz 09-26-03 08:12 AM

^^^lol...nah...it's like Word~Perfect...although ya still soft ass dick...you can still cum good...lol...


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