Spittin again
 

Shit nigga~this aint no ordinarny track~
im on it~u kno it aint wahck///


Really spittin:
Membrans exploaded~brains imploaded~
Users banished~enemys vanished~
Lames extingused~shit i mean this/
Talent~in dis bisnuisses u need it~
Invertabrays~feed it/
Slangin rocks~Exchangin knocks/

Multis baby Read the First letters~
dun gotta edit~this track holla

Shit nigga beefin is what i be bout~
ill end yo enemy problem~like an Arizona drought~
My flow is like a water spot~
just keeps drippin~clips keep slippin~im still pimpin/
O.G's get bucked~
Ho's'Ts get fucked~my dick sucked~
shit thuggin is my life~
rifle yo strifle~Fuck the Spanish desciple~
Iffle-my sife~ima rival of my own cliq~
shit L.Ks aint gon slip~we tip timbers ova~

*laughs* ive had enough to drink im out 1

Ehhh,
This was really basic.....flow was off at times.I coulden't really figure out a topic on this,you diden't have multis or anything.Vocab was below level,your key or w/e you call this is a basic what i'd like to call a 'cat in the hat' spit.Elavate a lot
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it was a alright peice, was a decent read, your flow was alright lost it at some points, try using some multies to help support the flow, your structure was ok, overall it was a ok drop, keep dropping.