Punchlines That Drop Jaws(this A Hit) Lol
 

Enlist myself to spit it hard~core- prepare for verbal war.
If you say there’s no winning that cause im ahead in score.
For show I am…the man… my mind span expand to a metaphor.
That can rip through any of your terrain like a ford explore.
Regardless of area or…………….
zip codes that’s just assessments of assholes that get tore.
I spit twelve coast to coast-and most-
feed themselves from (SUN)~(en) you like glu~cose.
Put you through neurosis and stages of psychosis-
Cause you couldn’t get the crowd to move with hypnosis.
Get ripped wit tight spits that i hold down like vice grips.
Then use your triceps to stop the blood clots to your biceps.
take the ventricles form your larenex-
Extract your tonsils and wrap them around your neck.
Then tangle them in an angle you couldn’t dissect.
And I aint even finished with you ass yet.
there a million way to die,only one is homicide.
that leaves 999,999 I can make you reflect on till you regret.
Talked a lot of shit but don’t claim you aint provoked.
Cause I can kill you with quotes from your suicide note.
You probably wrote to your fam and fans the night before-
Cause even if you aint psychic you can tell what’s instore.
There is no antioxin for the toxin that can seep through your pores-
The active agent is the monoxide I exhaust through a mic chord.
Im so hardcore.... my parental advisory~ reads-
not for the underage or mentally elderly.
Haters beat amnesia to their heads to forget me.
But the initials M.KC hangs around like lynched memories of slavery.
I regret nothing with no bluffing you nigguz aint worth it…
Repeant to your heavnly father for your death and he said you deserved it.
And I know its depressen to those who know who im adressen-
fuck forgviness…. Even with HAIL MARY’S before and after confessions.
YOUR OUT~CLASSED NO WONDER YOU DON’T GET THE LESSON.
And what you think is the last thing im stressen-
I would of bruised you in ONE line to make a FIRST IMPRESSION.
Im APPITAMY OF AN EPIHANY the m.c.
LIVEN IN IMFAMY –spit with m-60 consitency.
A ROLL RULER the only way your TAPE MEASURE to me.
i been in this my whole life you been in a minute....in this game
the difference that if if we switched rolls you'd be 1/4th of me with only 15 seconds of fame.
NIGGUZ claim trigguz and new york cause in life they cowards-
you being ill is like pullen a drive bye in manhattan during RUSH HOUR.

god damn... your 2 freaking consistent
flow and punches were on point!

Cause I can kill you with quotes from your suicide note.

^^ damn...

ill as usual, keep dropping

Its That Simple
p.s. if you wanna see him at his best go here(free plug)
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81665

Yeah this was a good peice, it made a good read i thought, your flow was good very on point, i liked your punches they were good, good content, overall i thought it was a good peice, keep dropping.

THNKS TWIN

I think this was your best piece ever...Well technically...

Flow and rhyme scheme was better than any others...I luved the wordplay and lines spat...fo real...i' be quationg for ages

Props man!!

uppin

that was fcking nuts..lol....your punchlines were mad..you had great flow...word p you really out shined ya lyrical abilities this time lol for real that was mad... i liked

Enlist myself to spit it hard~core- prepare for verbal war.
If you say there’s no winning that cause im ahead in score.
For show I am…the man… my mind span expand to a metaphor.
That can rip through any of your terrain like a ford explore." dope start...good shit homie

UPPIN THANKS CAT

UPPIN THIS BITCH

i was definetely feelin that. the wordplay and vocab were off the fuckin hook, the content and topic were hella original, the structure was good as always, and the flow was on target which is nothin out of the norm for u. overall id rate it a 9-.5/10. i thought that shit was excellent, great post, and cant wait to read more.

peace.....

I HAVE ONE COLLAB A COU-PLE POSTS BELOW AND YOU SHPULD HIT ME FOR A COLLAB TWIN

^^yo i would, but ive been so damn busy lately. my last drop was a flop, so that sucked, and right now im not sure what i wanna write about. so after i get back on the right track ill hit u up on that, but i dont wanna collab wit u when im not doin so good, cause i dont wanna bring down the calibur of the song that could be made. so maybe we can do that collab in like a week or two, but ill make sure to hit u up wit that, cause im lookin forward to it.

peace.....

hot shit i liked it................nice piece i liked the way you came bk frm older pieces that weren't so hot.........this gave a strong indication of ya talents.......it was flowin,hard hittin etc......good shit.....hit at me for a collab.......i do open mic but jus now and then......i wanna catch a collab with ya now while ya spittin shit like this......holla

damn!! very nice spit. You had some raw punch's, nice flow and content was sick!!! good post, keep it up, 1

THNKS AND IM OPEN TO ALL COLLABS