Headphonez vs. [!Eyeronic!]
 

aight, since u wanna raise the time limit, i'll give no more than 40 minutes. max 20 lines. good luck. Check in before you spit! All rules apply in terms of votes.

Listen HeadFonez:

I-Spit-Text, That Makes You Get-A-Change-Of-Sex, So I Wont Come as Hard ||
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Split-Your-Personality-Apart, So Your Bars-Arent-From Different Points of Veiw ||
This Day-You'll-Rue , Fearing The Mail, Because the Pain-Im-Delivering-You ||
Give-Time-For-Sub-Do, My-Rhymes-Are-Rude, Diminish-Your-Known-Existance ||
Skill-Is-Whats-Missin, HeadPhonez Possess-Wannabee, Like-The-Detroit-Pistons || ( Didnt Make Finals )
Like-Atom-Bomb-Ready, He Takes-Shelter, From Harm & Danger-That-Attacks-Him ||
His-Bright-Light-Is-Dim, None-Admire-Him, Anger-Rising, Whack-Is-His-Sin ||
Words-Like-Daggers, I Cut-His-Hopes, Strangle-His-Throat, So-He-Cant-Come-Dope ||
Losses-He-Copes, My-Temperature-Rissen, You & Your Verse Is Gay-No-Room-To-Interlope ||
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For-Your-Sake, i'll Stop At-10-Lines, I'll Let Fonez Eat His Head-To-Speak-His-Mind ||

10 lines all I had time for

You broke the rules, i said forty minutes was the limit/
now i'm so confused, should i wait or should i begin this/
it doesn't matter, cuz whatever i choose, i know i will win it/
i think you'll lose cuz you've been schooled since my very first sentence/
battling you is senseless, there's no point, this joint is avoiding failure/
i'm a palace, you're a trailor, i'm the ocean, your a sailor/
-there's a- point -where a- newbie begins to breakdown and quit/
you thought you could spit sick, this is a risk you dished for shit/
listen up buttercups, before you get stuffed/
here on RB, we don't play with barbies, we play real rough/
though you think you're tough, this is some advice: back off before you get crushed/
i don't wanna ruin you're life, i want you to eventually get a wife/
but when you battle me, i'ma killa ya with my lyrical knife/
despite what you thought, you're not hot, ain't got skill/
i think you're battling on RB, simply for the thrills/
no pills could cure you're verse, no drink could quench your thirst/
when i burst, i come out first, you're the wost, OK? i know that truth hurts/
that purse you carry is barely able to nurse your curse/
i'll tear your shirt with my words, they're magical/
you're verse is so corny, it's so freakin laughable/
now i'm at my limit, 20 lines max/
i don't need a finisher, i think i can relax.

damn, eyeronik got this wit punches. both verses could have been better, but overall eyeronik took this. good battle

vote-eyeronik

Thanks; uppin for more votes!
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Punches-eyeronic
Flow-eyeronic
Creativity-eyeronic
Wordplay-eyeronic
Meta's n multi's-eyeronic
Overall eyeronic
He had tha overall better verse, hit my battle up wid X ecution
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uppin

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eye was a lil more complex with verses...nice creative punches...disses were iight...nice wordplay..

headphones was to basic...rhymin rough and tough .. his bar punches were elementary...ot heat in his disses...be more creative...elevate some

vote eyeronic

uppin..............

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VOTE - EYE

Head Phonez Verse Wuz Decent . . .
Eye's Verse Wuz Dope . . . Nice
Wordplay, Flow Nd Punches . . .
Simply Betta Verse . . . Nice Shit..
Tryout For Diamond Mindz Dawg ...

One-Sided
PEACE

dis was obvious

one sided niggaz

vote goes to EYE

bedttter punches, nice vocablulary skillzzz and nice wordplay, dis nigga won in every aspect, pizzle boyz nice battle