Mary~Jane vs Mic Trourment
 

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votes votes votes please
ill spit first as soon as you check in

no doubt boo. i'll get a peak at what ya offer and drop a line in a bit., i got to run to the store for da moms. PEACE

no doubt ill spit ya right now 10 lines all love hun




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good luck the guy and the **girl** hope this will be good, cause I think I'll take someone between you 2 if I'M impressed no no just joking

I've got `trunks` with `pumps`, but don't `run` cuz Mary leaves "`punks`~wit~lumps"
at best, your verses are like `periods`; they only gettin `RE(a)D` like "`once~a~month`"
I'll open "ya~face~wit~a~razor"; you're spittin `incorrect` so I'll be "backspacin~you~later"
I'm "basically~greater", ya 'feelin~me~still?'; my `delivery's~iLL` like "crack~patients~in~labor"
What kind of "possible~efforts" could 'possibly' stop me from 'droppin' you on a "hospital~stretcher"
wit the entire "top~of~ya~severed"; you aint even `safe at home` cuz I been "stompin~the~`catcher`"
wit you at `base` point, I`m `rounding through`, `anxiously stealing` this win like `home base "runners`~do"
but beat you? that's fun to do, cuz on you I `drop more ammunition` then angry `machine "gunners`~do"
mic trourment `stay dorment`, you "eruptin'" is little more than "gassed~up"
you should forfeit, cuz your only oportunity for victory is passed~up

yep well you surprised me alot nice girl, seriously i wasn't waiting for that nice shit of yours, the other bitch will have to do a great job to kill that (question is that your first spitting : stp there i know it's not your first but its good) I'll be voting

thanx taxback for da feedback
and no that aint my first spit haha





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I give a phuk wether or not she's~able-to-flow~she gonna call me a'Gardner' the way ima ~play-with-a-Hoe~
as i~enable-da-blows~ i hope the *trama's-computin~ cuz battlin me for a win is pointless like~condom-re-usin~
here let me explain cuz im sure~i'm-causin-confusion~ 'in the end ya fucked girl' and i don't mean a~erotic-conclusion~
that shit was ~lame-at-best~ quick some one charge this sluts mind of crimes so she can give her~brain-a-(r)rest~
scripts her rhymes like a 'insecure novleist' just look how she has to~explain-her-text~
have her 'scared to shine' like ~panic's-stars- you'll be quicly forgotten like you rapp'd on~xanex-bars~
make her a ~fan-at-heart~ thats ~got-to-be-logik-stricken~ she's only here cuz on her last site she got beat more than~islamic-women~
ya 'connection' to hip hop is like battle links with~error-readings~ i'll have ya 'ass grounded' like banquet halls with ~chariless-seating~
you dont stand a chance like democracy in ~afganastan~ the way ima 'reduce ya worth' like ~damaged-cans~
you must be 'left brain dominant' cuz you aint~right-in-the-mind~ must be currency cuz youjust got spent and thats the~life-of-a-dyme~



RESPECT BOO. 1

nice verse playa
now lets get some voteys!





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pleeeeeeeeeease?
vote?
















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both of you excelled in terms of multis, metas and flow, but then again..both of your verse were stretched as well. in the end i felt that while MJ is fine as fuck, Mic's punches were more direct and on point...


vote-MT

thanks for the vote Dezyir ;)

uppin for more votes

weeeeee

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can you guys go and comment my first text in english vs tu cents i think he did no show lol i was really bad lol and i win thats ok go see this

Mary Jane is Pretty! LoL

Nice Spit Mic Tournament! have her 'scared to shine' like ~panic's-stars- you'll be quicly forgotten like you rapp'd on~xanex-bars~
make her a ~fan-at-heart~ thats ~got-to-be-logik-stricken~ she's only here cuz on her last site she got beat more than~islamic-women~


^ cracked me up

good job boo!

ahhhhhhh she changed her signatire, her sig use to ay the life of a dyme, thats why i closed liek i did. lmao.