Meaning of life?
 

Life is strange
Diced ways rolling combinations
Of blatant hatred and or praise
Rifts of phases replace loved faces
In tombs of masons
My creation...what purpose does it serve
On births entry to earth?
Im perturbed by this stabbing question
Congesting my thinking world
And whos that girl named hope?
I don’t know
She'll fill the voids hole but when?
Entry meant but her face is blind
Decypher signs in due time
But wait in line…hold your horses
Reign outside forces
Maturities cautious rewards for plaudits
Yeh…a metamorphis of age
Reach a stage
In the spotlights haze lies a job
Salary mobs office called plod
Ethics dropped…shod of care
Slice of the pie?I want my share
I swear itt better taste sweet
Thats when despairs heat
Is cooled downbeat and leaped
Frogs born…a heap of spent years
Smoke screen clears
Tears abate fears and destination docks
Shes a perfect knock..i answer
And swap finger rocks
A Vow in frock maps the path
Aftermath…not two childs but three
Take a seat of glee
And u realise eyes see..procreation is what life means

Hmm...

First was thinking this would be a played topic...
But your imagery drew me in...
Flow wasnt as on point as you usually are...
But as always your vocab, emotion and imagery were superb...

Nice drop fam...

Peep:
SS Verse: On the Horizon

definitly a good drop, your vocab is fucking ill, your imaginary is crazy an the flow was tight..i havent read much of yours but this really caught my eye great peice man..an if ya haVE TIME CAN YA CHECK OUT MY PIECE BE YA SELF? THANKS MAN

^^what they said

i think your flow was good but i havent read much of you previous work

chrit was right, the imagry had me like wow

great drop kid...

if you would be so kind
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82007

yeah this was a good peice i thought, it was a good read, your flow was good in this peice, your vocab was good as well, i liked this peice, it was a good read overall, keep dropping.

i thought the post was pretty good. the flow was on target, and the wordplay and vocab both were good. the content and topic were pretty original. i thought this was a good read as well. keep postin man, i really enjoyed readin that.

peace.....

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thanks and upping

more feedbak pleas

whats a man gotta do to get feeddbak?
give away money?

fuk it.....
give me feedbak....and i'll make sure bash gives u a handjob

for real i thought the content was dope,
flow was no where to be seen,
the piece was just absolute garbage all together
wtf? is with all the replies u get? if sand wrote this ppl would be on his dick in 5 seconds
what is it with ppl and "net respect" i mean if the man has skills say it, who cares how many posts they have
not many ppl who replied actually dropped a reply
fgee u didnt use 1 ounce of skill on this,
ok i know ur like 50% better then this,
this piece was bullshit, and just testing if the ppl who reply to shit are herbs,
and yes most of you are, cause u did not even give this man the props he did or did not deserve,
first u looked at his post count then went [na i wont even have to read this to drop a reply how can he be dope]
for real this was the most garbage thing u wrote lately.......
this sucked ass, fgee u have skill i know that u know that but u didnt not use any in this