ArtikQLit vs [oRbiiT]
 

10 lines minimum.

12 lines maximum.

Every rule applies!

Due : 9 pm tonight.

iight here we go..
if he beats me, he gets inta Diamond Mindz automatically..if he wants to that is..
if not, he'll still get put in..lol if he's dope..
iight, I'M PREPARED TO LOSE..BRING IT ON

iight..

Orbits a talentless piece of shit & this lame lost quickly/
for real, u couldnt be talented if ur last name was Ripley/
You the epitome of stupidity, the abyss of the site/
Make phrases to copywrite when they ain't good nuff ta bite/
Like a septic tank, you're "Fulla Shit" rankin yourself first Seed/
You wouldn't be a "Dope (w)rapper" if you was a "Zig-zag" wit Weed/
Orbit, Quit denyin it you really are a lost Man~Of~Cause/
Because your hot flows have done stopped like havin Men-a-pause/

FINISHER

when da game gets robbed by nursery rhymes, i'm bla~ming~dis~thief/
u can b packed wit Foreman accesories n still not b bla~zing~dis~beef//

ha..i went bak to my old still for this battle..
dk why..

Didnt you go to school?! and learn how to spell; let me Art Tic U Late.
Minds of diamonds are worth nothing; for this; your in the wrong mind state.
Admitting defeat before we drop; thats almost as bad as your win list.
On second thoughts; your crew is whack; so if you lose; I still wouldnt be in it.
Damn! with wins like that im sure; I can handle your uncut version.
Slice right into your mind; to steal your diamonds; im the highest paid surgeon.
Caught your diversion; with legends; there's always a means to the end.
& your name change did it; there was never street in you; the whiteness came & went.
Diamonds in your sig; diamonds in your mind; to bad there not in your verse.
When words dispurse; you'll feel the clash; and look for Kredit in your purse.
I could lead your crew; but before I go to great measures; get good members.
Cus I could savage each emcee with in them; and show them im gifted; before december.

Explaining one line: he majorly dick rides on kredit.

haha..
i under-estimated u..
well i think i lost this..

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Haha; this isnt even everything I got. = ]

Good battle my friend; uppin for some votes..

Me: do you think i wont he battle?
TwOFAceD 99: close ta call..
TwOFAceD 99: maybe u did by a lil cus u had tha personals..

Okay Nice Battle From Both Of You....But I Feel That Orbit Took This One Pretty Hands Down Becaue Of His Personals and Nice Punches..... He definitly Should Be In Diamond Mindz If He Wants....Cus He Won......

vote-orbit

werd...
i'm glad to take this loss..
he's in diamond mindz now..
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Word; Im reppin it now my friend



Good battle bro; we should get some crew battles going.....
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Yeah I think ya did Homey...Thats gotta be the worst verse I've ever seen U drop.....How U spit that dope ass verse in our battle then come with a piece of shit against Orbit? LoL

Anyway Orbit got this in all categories, pretty much dominated the battle.....


Vote = Orbit

Thank you Capcom....

Uppin for some more votes; now this sucks that we are fam,

hate to see you get a loss on your record, well its not over yet.

i think articqlated had this, i enjoyed his verse far more

flow-artic
punches-artic
personals-orbit
vocab-orbit
enjoyability-artic

so i vote artic for a better allround verse

u deserve dawg..

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yeah u did underestimate him...........art came really weak and orbit came very strong. MUCH better punches by orbit, especially working in the diamonds in so many lines. That was nice. Flow was better too...ur lucky art didnt come stronger cuz this would have been very close. But lucky for you he didnt...

vote= orbit

please hit up my battle against carsonjet.......

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=82284


peace..................

iight coo..
get this closed..

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