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my third eye gives me the capacity to discard anatomies that remain in back of me/
i am what u are plus what ur lookin see/
do the mathematics regarded as scientific calisthenics/
180 bench press to ur chest puffin wet lets workin out my groin havin the best sex/
with a mami latina hottie paparazzis flashin pictures sendin affiliates to cop me/
3 grams so when the white man scams im sent 20 years in a jam/
or life fuck my wife when she sees a nigga holdin more than me she gets hype/
keep ur dough ho im outta here tryin to do anotha show/

ok, you having trouble in vocubulary and its obvious. you have use clever words that make sense, not stuff ya lines with every single clver word you know off your head. nice internal but the flow wernt there. you got potential if u keep at it. keep at it bruv

i think u kinda suck man for real ur flow is not there i bet that u try to sound all smart n shit bu i think if u keep at it and shorten up ur bars u could have a flow throw a punchline i there somewhere something to make people think holla