pine-cone vs jus-10
 

Lets do this shit!,

Rules- NO pre written raps
- No one else can join in
- 7-15 lines
- only one rap
-must check in

You spit 1st dogg.
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yo justin, put down that pen/
you might actually scribble something good, now and then//-1
i just show'd up the real mc, mike morgan/
no no girls want him, he's gotta play with his organ//-2
and i'll do the same to you/
u can smack me off my feet but i'll came back with my shoe//-3
little eminem impersonater/
i'll own your ass like terminator//-4
i hope your listen'n to some girls growns/
in those koss headphones//-5
cause thats the most you'll get/
the girls are all in my turbo-vet//-6
they all wet cause they with me, teh big PC/
and now you see, i'm the next best thing since bruce lee//-7
see everyone is kung-fu fighting/
i'll knock you down faster than lightning//-8
and all the boys in my clan, they call me jacky chan/
cause i can climb the walls like i'm flyin, just like peter pan//-9
mabie you've never heard that story, well i'm sorry/
your parents must be againt violence,cause my version's gory//10
i'll slice adn dice you like i'm a ninja turtle/
there will be so much blood, your mom will hurle//-11
so be a good boy and sit, stay, roll-over/
or i mihgt just have to make you keil-over//-12
jus-10, what are you, a 10 line wonder/
try and beat my line and i'm sure your blunder//-13
my voice eccos like thunder/
the girls suck my dick, unlike you, your a pussy muncher//-14
now i'm to tiered to spid/
just taked this shit//-15

uppin for the vote, cause this fool will choke.
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Like professional kick boxers I'm quick to bring da feet (defeat)
This guy will die quicker than boys from the back street (Backstreet Boys)
You a hoe who want's to go toe to toe with my elusive flow
Ya better lay low, shut you off like a low rating tv show
What the fuck bitch I aint no motherfuckin impersonator
Oh, and by the way...I'll exterminate the terminator (He compared himself to the Terminator)
Look at this dumb faggot he calls him self Pine Cone
You entered a danger zone prepare to be overthrown
Cause I'd murder your ass just to feed my dog a bone
Watch out cause my verse is equivalent to an atomic bomb
Leave the Pine Cones in the forest, they don't belong on RB.com
I have words and phrases that amazes and cause dazes
This herb raises his verse in church and don't get praises
As I learned this bitch is like matches the way he gets burned
I could leave him on his death bed and his mother wouldn't be concerned

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Yo, all I can say to Pine Cone is that you seriously need to elevate. JUS-10 beat you in every category: multis, structure, punchlines, flow etc. This should be an easy win for JUS-10.

Thanks, but from now on please only post if you can poll vote.
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jus 10 took all this shit
cones bars were to short and structure was off and also flow
jus had flow and he had structure

vote = jus 10

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Pine Cone's verse was too basic. It seem as though Jus-10 didn't even have to try very much to beat him. Jus-10 took this with better EVERYTHING.