CarsonJet-2k4 VS Dark Illusions
 

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no crew or d/r or hate votes
i will spit first


ding ding

check in..........im droppin soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!

See I gotta flow so sick ya drown in vomit//
if I wanted to laugh I'd get tha paper and read tha comics//
this fool think he hard when he softer than Charmin's softest//
spit fire don't needa lighter to smoke this fake-dank//
to this low-rank, I let tha blunt-blaze wit purple-haze blurrin ya vision makin everyday a blind-date//
lyrical mind-rape...rhymes compli-cate-ya-mind-state-n-make-ya-mind-faint//
ya lines-stink like u wuz shittin outcha mouth -n- spittin outcha ass//
this must be a circus act cuz this clown still makin me laugh like i got sprayed wit laughin gas//
break ya ass in half like 1-backslash-2 then 3 -n- 4 ta leave ya broke lika kit-kat//
at last Im done wit dis cat...he tried ta hit-back -n- got TKO's quicker than a sack from Warren Sapp//

only reason this kat called me out was to spit mad personals from the past....
jus like veryone else....well good luk....

o yeh an diamond mindz is cuttin him-he's hopin this gon help...lol

Dark Illusions.....
Catastrophic..I snap dis kids spine like drie elastik
Old Vet accept a newbie call'now ya think ya fantastic?
Forget Diamond Mindz ima cut u myself-
Toss u a loss manually have u beggin fo'help-
Neva changed infra'structure dealin witta 2k4-
Whats left off ya verse but a few bittin words-
Better start lookin tords da WarLords-
Mindz already sliced ya fertility Cords-
Dumb fetus...shoulda rep'd ya mothers anotomy a lil longer-
Now ya crewless an toothless wishin ya mom fuk'd sum one stronger-

time for sum votes
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Uppin 4 sum votes...........nice drop carson!! still uppin tho!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

aight im gonna give it to carson cause of his punch's were workin real well and they was tight dont get me wrong dark use was tight to but here let me break it down right quick

multi's dark
wordplay both
complexity dark
structure both
flow both
punch's carson
vote carson i think punch's win's battles mad props to both and much respect for both

it was really tight!!

i totally agree with mr.spits! nuttin more to say!
vote: carson.....

please look at this cuz people sleep on:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=78934

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ghlight=xl4real

peace!

maybe my worste drop ever..........................uppin
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Great multi's from Dark Illusions...
Nice flow...

Those two catagories go to him for sure.

The punches, the personals, the wordplay, and the "oh shit" factor go to Carson.

Shorter, sweeter, and that closer was "goddamn"!

Holla back...

Born vs. Spits

dark illusions ya flow was tight, i liked it but i av to give it to carson


he had better punches an flow

u had nice multis though


vote on this peeps so it can be closed an i can battle again
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82245

dark came iight...did'nt hit that hard tho...punches were ok..disses was mediocre...be a lil more creative...

carson came nice with tha punches...disses hit good..his last four lines was a killa!!

vote carson

coo.....4-0 uppin........thanks fer votes peeps
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I have to go to carson on that he made it way more personal, funny, and had better structure that other cat. I mean I dont know if I have to explain to much just read other cats posts

Vote - Carson