Mary~Jane vs Solar Eclipse
 

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no crew/dickryding/hate votes

check in first, tell me if u want me to spit first or u wanna go head
holla

aight im spittin right now

Solar Eclipse, ya thats you kid, cuz in this battle I`ve `left ya in~the~dark`
Too easy to sick~him, makin you a vic~tim was just a walk~in~tha~park
The winner is obvious, cuz im bombin~this, peeps is placin they bets
If this kid is in `mint condition` then ima `freshen~my~breath`
I took my pic outta my sig, to lessen you pre~puberty kids sex~drives
I`ll hurt ya ego so hard you`ll be depressed in ya next~life
like `losin scenery in~a~play` you `never get props on~stage`
Stickin ya `dick in a shotgun` the only way you`ll ever `cock~a~gague`
So stop~tha~hate kid and just admit ya lost
you pay tha~cost, your ego`s just `gassed up` like `jews in tha holo~caust`

you're finished.........



Played punches play your part, ur verse must be a painting the way I rip your art apart…
Mark victory charts, couldn’t get higher than me if u smoked ur name from the start…
Serve you a loss on a platter, ur chatter is crimson so I must have struck a nerve…
Swerve ya verse, your words must be a racetrack the way they’re connected by curves…
Disperse verbal inspiration, break ur system down cuz im spittin too much information…
Crack communications, my bars get holy elevation like saints with sacred revelations…
Leave nothing but devastation, shatter Mary’s mental clear like broken glass…
You can’t last, skills to fast, rewind time to pick pieces of a victory of moments passed…
You think u can win? I break confidence, splatter you around like messy condiments…
Displace your face, place your picture in a pond so you could go fishing for compliments…

i got a preposition mary................

i doubt we're going to get this battle voted on any time quick.....................

i suggest we get it moved to front lines..........................

But i can only get this down if you're down for it as well. Post in here if you do or not....

get at me...................peace...............

aight i agree lets move it

Aite... Ima Have To Go With Solar On This One... Mary Jane Has Some Skill... But Her Style Is Really Newbish And Most Her Punches Were Played... Good Verse From Both...

Swerve ya verse, your words must be a racetrack the way they’re connected by curves…
^Heh... Made Me Laugh Because It's So True.

you pay tha~cost, your ego`s just `gassed up` like `jews in tha holo~caust
^About The Best Line In Mary Jane's Verse... But It's Played... So... Vote=Solar.

And I'm Movin This To Front Lines So You Kids Can Get More Votes.

yo this were hot verses of both:

MJ:
Stickin ya `dick in a shotgun` the only way you`ll ever `cock~a~gague`
you pay tha~cost, your ego`s just `gassed up` like `jews in tha holo~caust`
really nice shit....................

solar:
like axe said...

Swerve ya verse, your words must be a racetrack the way they’re connected by curves

also really cool...

but this is hard to judge man....

ima give this to solar.....i liked yo multis......
peace!

please look at these battles dawgs, cuz they´re gettin slept on:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81852

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=78934

Breakdown

Punches: Both
Structure: Solar
Flow: Mary
Metas/Similes: Both
Multies: Solar
Vocab: Deffinantly Solar

This was relatively close, i agree wit the first voter on marys structure, sort of newbish, but she will learn, she got potential
Solar had much better vocabulary, more experienced

Nice battle, enjoyed them, i enjoyed marys better but that dont make her win, she lacked in sum areas

Close


Solar or Mary please hit this up for this honest vote, thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83382

Re: Mary~Jane vs Solar Eclipse
 

MOB, i aint tryin to be a bitch bout it but u never can tell...

whoa....MOB, you voted on this battle? You moron haha.......................


since im a good guy, ill get axe e. um to change it...when he comes on that is.............

after all, a good battle is a fair one, right?

peace.............................

i think solar got this

MJ's verse was more of a freestyle (not sayin that is bad)
but she wasnt focusing on her punches

one line i liked from her was the "props on stage" nice wordplay

but solar took this with harder hitting punches

okay verses from both

Vote = Solar

Both had nice verses Mary was killin em toward the end. Yeah she did her thizzle but Eclpises' wordplay, rhyme scheme, and vocab was a lil bit better. Not everything he said was hard but he was said just enough to win this one.
M.J., you did good though shorty.
Holla

yo nice battle solar eclipse, you impressed me quite a bit, once this is done, if you want we can rematch, i liked battlin you a lot :)

Clean battle
mary jane damn gurl uve elevated didnt u jsut register
nice record for a femcee.....
u got skilll
solar came hard clean punches
sum good personals from both

Vote- MARy jane....
^^ l luv smokin u


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83726

HEATED BATTLE PEEP >.vote honestly ..pc

I think solar took this one cuz he had some great punches. Each of you had some nice wordplay. But solar won the battle.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83447