!!!! Over 4 Good!!!!!!!!!!!
 

Playa it's over 4 good, and I dont want nothin to do with you
It seems that all you ever wanted me to do was screw with you
I can't believe I fell for your game and thought we had something
Now I can see that this was all a lie and all we ever had was nothing
I new you for years and I thought we were best friends
Too bad that you lied to me and this is the way it ends
We whent out before and we made some real bad mistakes
Now this is just a re-run of last year so you can watch my heart break
Thought I can trust you and I told you some stuff that no one knows
Next day I get phone calls from my friends, now I know how it goes
You destroyed my reputation and made me look like a fool
Now I'll do the same to you, man you'll never be cool
You backstabbed all the time but then I felt that one real good
I'm still recovering from the pain you've caused me, cuz eventually i would
Now I'm more carfrefull and now I'm more aware
I dont like you no more and never again will I ever care
You ruined a good thing now I feel like I'll never love anyone again
In the long run your game will backfire and you'll feel the pain again
I wont care to think about you , you wont exist to me no more
You took what was good and you made me look like a whore
The samrt thing to do is express my feelings through this song
I look back and I laugh at where this wack playa whent wrong
No girl will ever love you as I once did in the past
Girls will come and c ur game then leave so fast
Now your a joke to me and I laugh all the time
You've messed with the wrong girl, you cant fuck with this dime

Don't Sleep Peeps!

*shudders* some misspellings disgusted me (new/knew) and it was another typical bitching female about giving up the na na but i wanted to in as gentlemanly a fashion as possible *wink* to inform u that u are only allowed 2 active posts on the front page so expect this or any of your other poems, 1luv.

uh uuh......

yo....i can't knock on someones feelings....like that one cat did...
its a poem...and a poem expresses how one feels...this was deep.
and can tell u been hurt.....u expressed urself real nice.....and
thats real talk....good job

someone got punked...we all get punked once or twice...nobodys a superpimp playa whatever..what goes around comes around and with all due respect you probaly had something coming you way....like what you wrote about.....

this wasnt bad but id do this more creatively...and its not my rhyme either..and im not a girl....this wasnt bad though besides the mispellings...but if you do this for real your typing dosent mean shit and text does nobody any justice.....

but im about to edit all of your other posts because nobodys supposed to have like six threads on one page...your lyrics will be safe in my email if you keep upping your threads...I wouldnt wanna rhyme your lyrics...but I would like the forum in order...

like the other moderators...
thank you for your time and attention span....

iight

girl poems are a way to vent emotions and pain or whatever you want to get out, and you sure did get it out in this piece. it was almost blinding. although some of the rhymes turned me off it was a bit much sometimes i found, it was covered up with all the emotion and that helped you pull it off.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

Thanx for the feedback!

and thanx to my boo 13th

personaly i thought this was ill, for too long have our beautiful females been stepped on by playas/pimps if you will, regardless of who u pimpin and who u playin u still gonna get pimped and played one day, but them gold diggers do tha same thang so its just a question of personality, keep ya head up girl these playas/pimps aint real, even thought they might be pimpin they aint real,u catch my drift, although this piece was ill though, good imagery, real emotion felt, personal things are tha worse things for somebody to spread, trust is hard to give to someone again after shit like that happens, nice vocab,nice wordplay,good rhyme scheme,and structure, i liked tha endin a lot, keep droppin tha hotness.~1~

Yeah i thought this was a good piece, it was worth the read i thought, it had meaning to it, and i thought you did good at expressing yourself, overall a good piece, keep up the good work.