i've been gone 4 a while
 

i've been gone but im here now ready 2 spit again


yo yo yo yo yo

i'm back man and i'm da best by far//
ya flow is tired it need a fukin energy bar//
u think u nice how did i guess it//
when i write it's illegal and my hand gets arrested//
im not through so check it//
spit game that a get ya chick naked//
my gun buck quicker than i fuck and dats 1 second//
bullets enter through da front and out da back they exit//
which a leave ya ass stiff in a casket//
(u little bastard)
a here now only jus 2 smash these hatas//
blast at they brain and turn it into mashed potato's//
im standin still but moving up like escalators//
get paralyzed and start spittin threw respirator's//
so run from it and catch a back stinger//
don't hate cause we rollin up blounts da size of shaq fingers//
if u leave ya car around my nigga's then it's a rap//
cause we pick locks da sameway we pick bra straps//

yo this was a little keystyle let me know what yall think holla

energy bar line made me laugh cuz i was eating a power bar at the time and it almost made me gag lmao
and shaq's fingers are something that scares me...yes
nice one

yeah i thought this was a good spit, like ya use of vocab, for the most ya flow was good, but didn't like

"im not through so check it//" thought it stoped the flow

on the whole thought it was a decent drop.....................PEACE!

fuck how many ice ages were u gone for
what the crap was that
u had no flow
u had no topic
u had no zizz zazzz that had no meaning behind it
work on everything u belive in
then spit again in "text"

return the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83251