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Herbal vs. s1iCk
aight biatch, since u didnt wanna drop first, how bout we both drop tonite by 12??? check in if u agree wit this:
15-20 linez... first to 5 votes wins... 4-0 is a K.O.... no dr votes... must explain vote.... |
im down wit dat homie ill expect nothing but greatness from u i very much doubt i will shit on u but who knows i might actually try this time
ait then by 12 tonite its on slick BRING IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
aight dogg, u jus cant seem to get a clue/
how you gonna name ya'self after a fuckin girl's shampoo?/ everyone should logg-off, and change their name to "puffingrass"/ cuz everyone u run against seems to simply "smoke" ya ass!/ and u need to stick to "suckin" people hate when u "bitin"/ only time you "come hard" is after "one-handed typing"/ i never pre-write, everything from the top of the lid/ peep the verbal dismemberment of this "cabbage patch kid"/ my lyrical agility begins where yours seems to peak/ you gettin ya ass ripped, like kobie in the room wit a white bitch/ my "W" is inevitable, you shouldn't even try this/ this bitch couldnt be "sick" if he caught the West Nile Virus/ if u where "stretch armstrong" i'd still be out yo reach/ ya rhymes make less sense than a 30 minute schwarzenneger* speech!/(spell?) you're useless, like a paraplegic in front of a pornstar/ man fuck 20, i kill this lil roach wit 2 bars!/ this aint a battle, its a massacre, dont take a genious to see!/ bitch even if my name was "Jill" you still couldnt be "Jack" next to me! aight man, dont feel like writin this is wat came outta my head, might be weak but im fuckin tired...peace, good luck |
im just a misunderstood gene-e-is/(genius)
slick my bitch test tube my fukin guinnea pig/ why does herbal torment slick like this?/ trying to hit up on gurls is the only time he can get a diss/ havent u seen all them bitches screamin?/ ask around i got my name by soiling a gurls hair wit semen/ u dreamin thinkin u can beat this rap deamon/ now u squealin MY rhymes are more agile like willie beaman/ im like biggie cuz i just want the loot/ if i tried to rhyme wit bow wow hed give ya da boot/ i wont ever stop im fukin hell bent/ u rhyming to people should be a federal offence/ claiming to be great is ure only defence/ u got no common sense i bet u coudnt climb a fence/ to spit all my knowledge, a million tongues required/ u talk for a while but dont say shit so just retire/ u cant be hot not even if u caught on fire/ rap skills u need dire ure brain is empty like a tire/ thus with this, its obvious herbal prevails/ and slick tries hard but yet again falls short and fails |
uppin...for more votes, be fair and explain, no fuckin haters please!
and good luck herbman ur gonna need it...i see ur gettin a lot of practice in, thas dope.... |
imma have ta go with herbal on this one.................his rhymes had more flow than the other cats........thats about it
vote=> herbal |
lol,explain the vote more thoroughly, more flow? dont be stupid dogg, that shit'll get thrown out on any fuckin site!
explain shit rite or dont vote!!!!!!!!!!!! |
dont hate slick its ok if it makes u feel better dog u can be my lil mentor and shit haha jk anyway good battle fo sho
hollllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll lllllllllllllllllllllllllllla |
s1ick = not too good..
herbal = worse.. both of you need to work on the punchlines.. s1ick.. you used a cum line and a sick line, that is unacceptable. herbal you just lacked in any sort of intelligent rhyme scheme, you capped off loot with boot... just keep writing. anyways herbal's extreme lack of punches lost this. |
wut thef uck is up wit people now a days? can they jus fuckin vote? they gotta act like the best rappers in the world...so wut it was weak?jus vote yo!!!
and unacceptable???wut the fuck are u the "rap seargant?" yo herbal holla at me man, we need to talk... |
ait well thanks for votin
lets get this shit closed more votes on tha polls wit explanations sl1ck hit me up on msn |
uppin............................................. ..........
this shit come on lets close this ........................................ ................................. ............................. holllllllllllllla |
who beefs when i give them MUCH NEEDED advice?
kid.. i've been writing since you were in the womb, ask any rb vet; which would include me myself and i.. fool. |
ok yeah, and u are like what...16 years old? this is a website u moron, not a gang or war,there is no such things as vets...and who the fuck asked for advice?? u aint no one to give advice homie, u jus post shit and battle text, now get off my nuts... oh yeah, keep voting...
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heres what i think
flow-herbal punches-slick metas-none really... multis- same as metas overall-herbal vote- herbal i think ya both need to get better... try and multie your lines up throw and internal in there to spice things up elevation none the less if ya would be so kind (not a battle) http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83050 |
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