The Hotshots(Basktetball Team)
 

Burnin The Basket With All The Shots
You Jumpin High, But It Will Never Be Caught
The Wars Been Faught, Cuz Its Over
Callin Us 'Pure Luck' Like We Was Ur Clover
Keepin Order, Yeah We Got The Moves
Behind Back, Between The Legs, Keepin It Smooth
We Keep Our Cool, Courts Where We Belong
Tryin To Beat Us? Hell No, Never Provin Us Wrong
U Aint Gonna Stay Long, Blow U Off The Court
Poppin So Many Shots, U Think Its DownTown NY
This How We Work, Its What We Call Our Day Jobs
You Be Droolin Over The Performance, Throwin U Da Cloth
You Never Be The Boss, We More Than A Team
So Close, More Then Friends, We Eachother Family...


Thats just my verse for the song

U Aint Gonna Stay Long, Blow U Off The Court
Poppin So Many Shots, U Think Its DownTown NY

Downtown NY is incorrect.
There is no such thing as downtown N.Y, just pointng that out.

An O.k piece, nothing really great but decent at most, it was an ok drop, I guess.

actually there is downtown NY...that's around Brooklyn and the Bronx...we just call it downtown though...like if you catch the train downtown you gonna end up around one of those boroughz...parts of Queenz is also downtown...Uptown is also parts of Queenz and Manhattan...

this peice was shit...
BOOOOOOO>

wasn't bad, but it wasn't a great peice....

heard better dawg..........

^^ lol i wasnt tryin, me and my basketball team like to freestyle so i just wrote somethin real quick.....haha

This was an ok little piece.

You can tell it's freestyle.

Pretty good, but kinda basic.

Nothing outstanding in the way of wordplay or complexity.

But the comraderie, the closeness on and off the court comes across.

Pretty sure that's what you were going for with this.

Keep up the drops, Slik.

Peep this for me, it's a bit longer than yours, but I'd like ya feedback.

Thanks...

Life verse

Thanks for all the reply