Secrets Of War (Remix)
 

Secrets If War - Beat
Tupac - Real Artist
Im Just remixin it

Hook:
you ride wit us~or
u gon die~tryin to fuck wit us/(Speedy)

LiL LoCo:
Niggas get crushed like its a game~
i aint in dis for da fame~
im here so niggas no my name~
it all da same~
wether u kno me~or u dun~
i aint gon concil ya~when im bout to roll on ya~
ill split ya in half for the fuck of it~
shit man my fans love it~
i come wit new sickness every spit~
i stick wit it~
(fuck yo shit) fuck my shit?~
get of dis gangsta dick~
before u learn 'da hard' way and get 'busted' by dis nut//

Hook:
you ride wit us~or
u gon die~tryin to fuck wit us/



LiL LoCo (Me) + Speedy (First 8 lines minem rest his):
Da craziest nigga on da block~
i aint gon front~u get in face u meetin da glock~
i got dis rap game on lock~
yo young ass Soldiers~think they hardcore~
my boys be boilders~cant be budged~u need to get in the yard-more(slang)~
we roll up in the lades Fifti deep~
we dun even gotta creep~we throw up L to the K and niggas gon sleep~
simple as that~whacked niggas get layed flat~
ill add anotha dimple to yo pat~
9 bullets couldnt kill a nigga~
it musta obviouly yo first time pullin da trigga~
u ride wit me~
u aint gon colide wit me~
even if u despise me~
nobody tries to fuck wit me~
im gangsta~and i aint frontin~
u pop to learn somethin//

Hook:
you ride wit us~or
u gon die~tryin to fuck wit us/

uppin

ok man that's cool...

but what kinda gangsta has time for 220 posts on an internet forum....

hmmm..... welll im sure you're real "real" so i will back off...

{Peace}

good

I liked it man. Nice shit. Nice structure and all. Keep droppin. And peep my stuff too. Lataz.

thanks nigga

Yeah this was a pretty good peice, good read as well, you should try to even your lines out a little bit though, but it had good flow, content was good and your vocab was alright, overall id say it was a good peice, keep dropping.