I 'unno... peep it anyway..
 

kronic ebonics smokin' tha rap nonsense
bombin' on 'em like bush in sedam's nest
I'm off meds, stoped it along with tha rock shit
an' now i'm so sick, it's like i can cough spits
so watch as i drop kick those pop hits
an' knock B2K back with the new block kids
honest, i'm comin' with a decible level above
the thresh-hold is beveled an' stuck
so the flesh'll surrender to cuts
blood'll never measure up to tha crips
got their chick on her knees suckin' the blue flag tied round my dick
i'll go five rounds of this,
rap like me an' weed,
an' you know blunts got pounds of it
how's the dip, 'cause i'm the chip of the old block
you just a slick flava that get's spread ova top

come on blunt, i've seen ur posts heaps
like ages ago, man u really need to spit
on a topic or two, i mean u got the general
idea of what to do, i mean u got flows punchlines
etc, but seriously u need to drop the "gangstaness"
and spit about a decent topic............................


return the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82918

ya ya, man, i save the topics for the audio... i'll drop somethin' deep in text soon time.. shit.. i ain't even been active really for like a month or more... 1

yo thought this flow was good but it kinda depleted near the end
it was still dope though.... check out my drop plz man...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82929

yeah this was a pretty good piece, alright read, your flow was pretty good through out the piece, try to keep the lines the same length, but you had good content, overall good piece, keep dropping, and check out me and Gene Pools keystyle if you get the chance, thanks.

ok, thanx for tips... i don't really need them, but good looks still... none of you guys know who i am... damn, i'm a vet here... just inactive as fuck now.. 1