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I Just Dont Know (Hot Shit)
Sometime I Just Dont Know....
My Mind Need'a Adjust To The Flow Merk In Sync Just'a Fuck Sum Hoes...... If You Jerks Must Sing Im'a Buck Sum Holes In Da Dirt Rusting Ya Career Quickly Tucked and Stole Snap Back Abrupt but Slow, Like A Spine on'a Book Disrupted and Sold You Think You Know This?, Bith You MisJudged It As A Whole I'm Not Out Ta Show Love, sHIT, i Just Wanna Juggle Ya Soul Joke Wit Ya Life When Ya Throat'll Get Choked Witta Knife Whoops! I Mis-Spoke My Write, If Dat^ Were Da Case you Wouldn't Be Holdin' A Life Call Me A Creator Cuz I'm Moldin This Mic, Controllin This Fight Burn Trees In Day Later To Night, You Could Say Im' Patrollin Wit Kites But When I Smoke I Just Dunno If I Really Get High It Only Puts A Funny Feeling In My Chest and In My Eyes Most of This World Carma But The Rest Is A Surprise A Guess of Where The Truth Lies, The Best is Where The Booth Hides Suggestive Stares Wit Eyes Wide, Chics Mess Wit My Hair Git Thier Lives Pryed Into, I Only Do What I'm Sent To, Kamikaze Or Not My Punches Cement You Crazy Enough Wit Tai Chi Tactics, Wen Chrit Get On'a Mic People Say "Why He Actin?..." And Spare Me The Jokes You Crackin, The Glare Of This Smokes What You Rappin What..?...(silence)..Thats What Happen...Not Hands But I Hear Gats'a Clappin Now Thats'a Rappin....Not Rappad....I Dont Give Gifts Like He's Wrappin Everybody Think They Hold Weight But Never Attempted Trappin Flood Ya Body Wit Ink And Scold Bait, A Clever Descending Transaction Your Exsistence Lacks Attraction, Anti Persistence Is Exact Your Back Trackin Slackin On Traction Slippin On Accident Active Trippin On Acid K.O.[guy] Whacker Than Factions Grippin Attatchments Of Cocks Plastered On The Picture Thas Flashin Drag Queens Would Figure Your Fashion and That Means You Kicked OUtta This Rap Shit I'll Smack Ya Lip Outta Tha Fat Shit You Call Ya Face, I'll Smoke You Like The Fag That You And Than Ash It (In Europe Ciggeretes Are Called Fags) So Get Studdied Up For You Test Me Bastad Even Get Buddied Up Witta Vest Cuz I'll Blass'Ya Survival Of Tha Fittest And Eye OutLast Ya Why You Aint Wit Dem Bitches?-Cuz I Shout Fasta Holla At Me Is Ma Job Ta Knock Out Bastads I Dunno Pretty Much Keystyle........... FeedBack..... peace |
That Tight.....
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yeah this was a pretty good piece, good read also, it flowed well through out the piece i thought, your vocab was good as well, your content was good too, overall id say it was a good piece, keep dropping.
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tru thanx fo feedin uppn
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this was tight like a kite...vocab was good...multi'z were on point like my dick in ya mom'z joints...content was like a bomb sent to convicts...(good)...holla...damn...now I gotta rhyme...and then freepost some more in another crewz forum...holla...
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tru thanx fo feedin uppn
__________________ "Red & Blue Like I Don't See What The Big Deal Is" - Eminem |
Merk
YOU KNO i remeber a guy by that name a few months ago he was pretty tight was wondering if it was you anyways on your peice the structure feel through perfectly with the short intro bars and the lenghy middle ones your theme stayed consistant however i didnt liek the use of this word:(Juggle) Ya Soul that made me uncomortable lol and thats the truth anyways it was a nice peice if you could peep one of the stalker link in my siggy thanks hazy |
damn you people and your long open mics
aight here we go, the flow was very good... the topic was kinda played but you put your own twist on it to make it good... the structure was definetly lacking... gotta try to keep your lines around the same syllabul count fav line was Call Me A Creator Cuz I'm Moldin This Mic, Controllin This Fight Burn Trees In Day Later To Night, You Could Say Im' Patrollin Wit Kites If you would be so kind http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=83050 |
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THANX BUT NAH IM NOT MERK...............juggle ya soul (play with your mind or life) |
Pretty good drop here, Multis were on point as usual, but like muh man realest said u need to fix ya structure a bit though...other than that the piece was great keep up the good work.
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thanx^
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upppn.....
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Shit Wuz Nice . ..
Good Vocab Nd Flow... Rolled Off Tha Tongue Dope Content.. Solid Drop Diamond Mindz Would Like To Have U 10Th Degree Is Eh . . . |
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