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N.D.eva 10-02-03 04:57 PM

No Pre-Composed
 
sittin pissed, just come up wit this battle type structured spit, staight out in the last 5 minutes flat.............

Ya think ya rhyme wit da illest more like wit da vocal illness
Like ya got bronchitis creatin restricted vocal tightness
Can tell ya new in this, comin up wit -10 less my likeness
I’m excited won harder wit my shitest vocal non-delighted
Emancipated realised my presumed conscripted I inscribed wit
My shit is complex wit out da looked up meaning for –AIGHT- it
Some day you’ll realise I wont compromise wit pre composed shit
Spittin lyrics dark twisted and full of raw rhyming instinct
From da brink of your suicidal voice box wit ya pre delinquent
Get ya self home dawg cry to mama bout my bullyin frequent

.::D-Eff3kt::. 10-02-03 05:31 PM

....> Uhh Pretty Wack..>Wasnt Feelin It <.........







~>eZ<~

N.D.eva 10-02-03 05:36 PM

wot do you expect im pissed, an wheres your shit noob

.::D-Eff3kt::. 10-02-03 05:42 PM

....> Yo I Wasnt Hating, Dogg, Dont Post If You Cant Accept Criticism....Ill Post Later On....NooB <.......








~>eZ<~

Menik 10-02-03 05:43 PM

It wasnt that bad, it was a decent read, it flowed pretty decent through out the piece i thought, content was pretty good as well, your vocab was good too, overall it was pretty decent, keep dropping.

N.D.eva 10-02-03 06:07 PM

aight Masta, thanx i thought it was average now that i look back, but i am pissed so.............................peace no hatin


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