LM vs V.A. $lim
 

here we go its up now you post first 10 lines all votes must be explained or they dont count

Yo check this

Yo whats the deal with your name/
It matches your rhymes at bein so lame/
Coz you can't rap wid me, you dont belong in this game/
Your styles the same as everybody elses, get some individuality/
Then try comin back and verbally attackin me/
You can't do it so take a rest for a little bit then try and spit/
But you'll find that your still a pile of shit/
Just admit it, your not the brightest candle thats ever been lit/
So dont even bother replyin just make an excuse like your dyin or somethin/
You can't beat me so there's no point you even tryin/.


Your turn man.

If this guy don't show does that mean i win the battle. I hope this guy shows. I'm curious to see what he's got

Will somebody comment on my verse. I need somethin to read seein as it aint bein replied to anytime this year. Where the fuck is V.A $lim anyway he's startin to take the piss

yo why the fuck do I invest any of my time
battling this bitch that cant grasp the concept of rhyme
yo want to compare me to candles when you're runnin ya mouth
thats fine then were candles now I'm blowin ya out
to write one rhyme he sits and ponder for hours
while I throw somethin down quick and you call him devoured
he took 10 so I guess I'll kill him in 8 (lines)
LM ya done. go back to ya love cause we know you L ove to M asturbate

Uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Good verse V.A $lim (i didn't expect that) Peace to V.A

aiight check it
flow:Slim
Structure:Slim
originality:Tie
punches:Slim
personals:Tie
opener:Slim
Finisher:Slim
my vote:Slim
ya both come wit similar verses but slim just edged it.

yo it hard to get peeps to vote on here so wud ya vote on these

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=82876
and
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=82737

LM's flow was aiight his whole verse lacked punches, he had like one coo one but it was kinda weak!-no hate LM just statin my opinion.

V.A. $lim's flow was pretty on point straight punchlines but nuthin really impressive, again ders no hates here only opinion, so I'll go ahead and poll vote now dat I've explained.

VOTE: V.A. $lim

Yo whats the deal with your name/
It matches your rhymes at bein so lame/
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LM seriously have you ever seen anyone win a battle with their ending words being NAME AND LAME? c'mon hun

Coz you can't rap wid me, you dont belong in this game/
Your styles the same as everybody elses, get some individuality/
Then try comin back and verbally attackin me/
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this was getting a little better still simpl eryhming tho
You can't do it so take a rest for a little bit then try and spit/
But you'll find that your still a pile of shit/
Just admit it, your not the brightest candle thats ever been lit/
So dont even bother replyin just make an excuse like your dyin or somethin/
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the center of your verse was proabably your strongest

You can't beat me so there's no point you even tryin/.
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that was a very VERY WEAK ender


VA

yo why the fuck do I invest any of my time
battling this bitch that cant grasp the concept of rhyme
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why you wasted your time? i have no idea!

yo want to compare me to candles when you're runnin ya mouth
thats fine then were candles now I'm blowin ya out
to write one rhyme he sits and ponder for hours
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you have elevated from your last verse i can see that and you will probably beat my ass in our battle the candles line was fairly good

while I throw somethin down quick and you call him devoured
he took 10 so I guess I'll kill him in 8 (lines)
LM ya done. go back to ya love cause we know you L ove to M asturbate
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decent outro WAY better than LM's i can see why he has 2 losses

obviosly VA took this


pay back the favor and vote on hot ice vs hazy

no hate to either of you especially LM i can see that your trying to elevate and that is what is importnat im doing that myself

isnt that a KO................................................ ......................................

nope you gotta grab 5 of them suckas to get the win nowdays

its a pitty so much times and space wasted huh?

what happens if there arnt 5 votes after 7 days does the person with the most votes wins or does it die also when I am postin and askin questions like this is it counted as uppin it cause I really dont want another DQ thats how I got that loss cause I was DQ'ed for uppin too much

boys that was all slim, no affence lm, but you had no punches at all.
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both you fools are wack even if i had my posts i wouldn't vote for either one of you fools............................................. ..........
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alright this is how it went for me...
flow:Slim
Structure:Slim
punches:Slim
personals:Tie
my vote:Slim

Props to both though.