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pine-cone vs teh best 23
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15 mins to write after check in. 5-15 lines |
hey greg, you hyper active lil fag,
take some pilles to calm you down or take a drag/ you new here so i'll go easy on you, but it wont take long you'll realize that you dont belong on RB.com/ justin helped me with that on, he's a real rapper, and i'm the real scrapper/ together with the help of the_real_MC, we'll make y"all see, were all there is to being an mc/ sorry greg, but you gotta prove your worth, mabie you'll join our crew/ but if you fuck this up, i'll lock you with teh tigers at the zoo/ |
what the **** you ant in no **** pine-cone just a puine wanta be you a has been pine cone wit no pine cone
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shit i forgot to check in, sorry..................
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uppin for the vote, even tho i dont deserve it cause this guy cant rap....................
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uppin(2) post again dude, we will give that privelidge to ya.
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cris the dis the big fat ***** who like to *** his mama .
you say yuo the candy man you a man cida man all yuo want is man al night you need help but i dont i am man and you a woman |
try this on for size
i am what ever you say i am but i will never be gay liek you got more things down south than your ever have in your life |
lol, thats a lil better, 1st thing, you cna swear, and 2nd, you dont rhyme by putting the same thing twice, rhyme a word with something else that sounds like it, make fun of me, explain how your gonna kill me, make fun of my mother, i dont care, just do something. read some other peeps raps and you'll learn.
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you think you can rap you could not rap your own grap if you have to . well this rap is done hahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahah ahahahahahahah
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what the fuck? was that the battle? wow what a waste of a thread, u both need to elevate drastically, but given the circumstances pine cone took this, let me break this down.
flow-pine punches-pine personals-pine structure-pine finisher-pine enjoyability-pine yo im the best, man u aint even close, u censor urself out, and ur rhymes r shit, u both need to elevate before ur next battle cause that sucked, but for this battle pine cone took it. peace...... |
Wakk Battle..
Pine Took Dis Hands Down.. Won All Categories...Nuff Sed ! Ya'll Both Needa Elevate |
thanks for the vote boyz, but i'm not goin all out, i'm just teachin this boy how to spit............
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k greg, when you get back, try a lil longer rap, put one line like for example,
you lil fucking *impersonator* i'll own you ass like *termanator*....... .....k try that, do like 5 of those sequences.. .................... |
also after al the spitting has been done you cau up 5 times to get votes, . uppin (1).......
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