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da boxa 10-02-03 07:22 PM

pine-cone vs teh best 23
 
normal rules
15 mins to write after check in.
5-15 lines

da boxa 10-02-03 07:32 PM

hey greg, you hyper active lil fag,
take some pilles to calm you down or take a drag/
you new here so i'll go easy on you, but it wont take long
you'll realize that you dont belong on RB.com/
justin helped me with that on, he's a real rapper,
and i'm the real scrapper/
together with the help of the_real_MC,
we'll make y"all see, were all there is to being an mc/
sorry greg, but you gotta prove your worth,
mabie you'll join our crew/
but if you fuck this up,
i'll lock you with teh tigers at the zoo/

i am teh best 23 10-02-03 07:33 PM

what the **** you ant in no **** pine-cone just a puine wanta be you a has been pine cone wit no pine cone

da boxa 10-02-03 07:34 PM

shit i forgot to check in, sorry..................
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and what the fuck was that dude, write a dis towards me........
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da boxa 10-02-03 07:36 PM

uppin for the vote, even tho i dont deserve it cause this guy cant rap....................
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da boxa 10-02-03 07:37 PM

uppin(2) post again dude, we will give that privelidge to ya.
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i am teh best 23 10-02-03 07:38 PM

cris the dis the big fat ***** who like to *** his mama .
you say yuo the candy man you a man cida man
all yuo want is man al night
you need help but i dont i am man and you a woman

i am teh best 23 10-02-03 07:41 PM

try this on for size
i am what ever you say i am but i will never be gay liek you
got more things down south than your ever have in your life

da boxa 10-02-03 07:42 PM

lol, thats a lil better, 1st thing, you cna swear, and 2nd, you dont rhyme by putting the same thing twice, rhyme a word with something else that sounds like it, make fun of me, explain how your gonna kill me, make fun of my mother, i dont care, just do something. read some other peeps raps and you'll learn.

i am teh best 23 10-02-03 07:45 PM

you think you can rap you could not rap your own grap if you have to . well this rap is done hahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahah ahahahahahahah

gotaloveforrap 10-02-03 07:46 PM

what the fuck? was that the battle? wow what a waste of a thread, u both need to elevate drastically, but given the circumstances pine cone took this, let me break this down.

flow-pine
punches-pine
personals-pine
structure-pine
finisher-pine
enjoyability-pine

yo im the best, man u aint even close, u censor urself out, and ur rhymes r shit, u both need to elevate before ur next battle cause that sucked, but for this battle pine cone took it.

peace......

Artikqlit 10-02-03 07:49 PM

Wakk Battle..

Pine Took Dis Hands Down..
Won All Categories...Nuff Sed !

Ya'll Both Needa Elevate

da boxa 10-02-03 08:02 PM

thanks for the vote boyz, but i'm not goin all out, i'm just teachin this boy how to spit............
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da boxa 10-02-03 08:17 PM

k greg, when you get back, try a lil longer rap, put one line like for example,
you lil fucking *impersonator*
i'll own you ass like *termanator*.......
.....k try that, do like 5 of those sequences..
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da boxa 10-02-03 08:19 PM

also after al the spitting has been done you cau up 5 times to get votes, . uppin (1).......
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