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**-*Blang vs Royal*-**
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NO: Hate D.R Crew Feeding Biting None Of That Bull Shit 15 Mins To Check In Afta Set Up Accepted On AIM You Spit First, I Spit 30 Mins Afta You Check In First Aight... |
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Vote on this battle n ill return the favore n give yall an honest vote remember to poll vote n explain your vote thanks ~1~
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83168 *will edit this for the vote* |
Aiyo Royal’s lacking the technical mentality aesthetics-still caught up on the commercial cosmetics/
Like diabetics- you r “missin out” on skill- “stickin” to dickriding genetics like “magnetics”// Bastard emcess you’re a juvenile like shit skids/ that’s why lyrically ya stay fucked like a pedaphile babysittin’ 10 kids// An airtight stranglehold on this shit, more-less/ diss Blang? Son save it-too bad dis nerd took that as hittin’ control S// My styles weak ya might say, as weak as a damn-tank/ I spit so much it forms a pool, and ya gonna sank// I think ya got too much dick in ya mouth, it’s brusin’ shit/ ya got da fucked up genes, cuz ya losin it// I jus rip crazy, cuz ya get lazy, and I can’t be stopped/ I’m goin to da top, I’m jus hot, bullets melt before I get popped// I’m jus da leanest, and I’am da meanest, I don’t do heat/ cuz if ya fuck wit me, you’re betta to jus face me, cuz ya turn ya back ya beat// And my rhymes are in perfection, cuz I always leave all in question/ dis is my profession, cuz ya gonna wonder if u’ll be in my next freestyle session!// |
You bout to get quick burnt than rolled like one joint...//
Tha truth is you couldnt move a crowd at gun point..// Youd get hurt son if we ever met in persom cuz id put my fist ta yo fist..// RB dont come with a bathroom cuz u aint shit in this place..// You Aint hurtin me I leave you with a big hole like open surgery..// Another 911-Emergency fuck jackin planes you really jackin men 4 RB Currency(rb=rap battles) Im like a fat fuckin virgin wit battles hard to lose..// So don't forget ya apron bitch, im servin beef like barbecues..// Ima have this Resident killed and have his blood specimen spilled...// Thrust you with an Icycle, jus so I can watch tha evidence melt...// You said this yo first net battle, now how wack is that...// Id knock you out, but you's a bitch, so ima jus smack dis cat...// U aint a gangsta who runs wit nines ill puncture ya bak wit novacaine to numb ya spine..// U aint real u be frontin wit lines ill put rebocks in ur head so i can fuckin pump your mind..// Acceptin to battle me? ur battle life expired so i won ur outta time...// Im like a football player who remains in bounds i neva run outta lines...// his is prewritten not to sway votes...his quotes are curved...normal are " lets get some votes...FAST. |
iight lemme key in n these verses
that’s why lyrically ya stay fucked like a pedaphile babysittin’ 10 kids// An airtight stranglehold on this shit, more-less/ diss Blang? Son save it-too bad dis nerd took that as hittin’ control S// this is the hottest part of d's verse this is pretty sick I think ya got too much dick in ya mouth, it’s brusin’ shit/ ya got da fucked up genes, cuz ya losin it this is just wack.....the verse had a pretty ill flow but it just didnt have the personals or punches iight sickness' verse Youd get hurt son if we ever met in persom cuz id put my fist ta yo fist..// RB dont come with a bathroom cuz u aint shit in this place this doesnt rhyme now Im like a fat fuckin virgin wit battles hard to lose..// So don't forget ya apron bitch, im servin beef like barbecues this is sick overall sickness took this 1 just b/c of the personals and the punches both need elevatin but its coo 1 |
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D-BLANG BREAKIN DOWN:
FLOW...alright...nothin special PUNCHES....a few good ones...mostly play'd and overuzed wordplay..not bad...forced META'S....not many multies..deceint vocab...good structure...poor overall......4.5/10 Royal... flow...good punches...not extreme but consistent wordplay...alright metas..not many multies..not many vocab...not bad...coul be betta structure...great structure.. OVERALL....7/10 NOT A BAD BATTLE... KEEP UPPIN PEACE VOTE-ROYAL |
uppin this battle... numba 1
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Royal took this easily in my opinion.d-blang yo are tight you just need to elevate a lil bit. Royal had better flow word play punches and creativity. my vote=Royal
please hit this wit a honest vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83129 |
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Royal merked him...
he got everything...... Punches Flow Creativity Werdplay Multi's Entertainment Overall Blang had none of da above.... Vote-royale |
aight let me break this down from what i saw
structure-sickness flow-tie vocab-d blang wordplay-tie punches-sickness personals-sickness overall-sickness props to the both of ya, but ima say sickness took this, good battle yall. peace...... |
this was a good battle i thought, both had good flow and wordplay, Vocab blang had, both had good punches but i think royal took thinks one, Royal had better punches i thought just came harder overall, vote goes to royal.
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