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Accelerate 10-03-03 08:33 PM

7 is Perfect
 
World Was Created in 6 days, imperfect/
The Seventh God Rested, Was it worth it?/
Was The Original Sin, Commited on a Saturday/
Was the Calendar Altered, To what God wants to say/



Proof, The days of Our Living in Religion and social Fear/
Our Problem is Only Ourselves, To A Court We Must Appeal/
Not Doubting God's Words, or saying The Bible's Untrue/
But Corruption in The Church, Leads we Have Little Proof/
Much of What Is Said, I still Believe In God's Words/
Realizing if You Live By The Gun, You die Bye God's Sword/
Maybe, If I Look Back and Catch A Flashback, Seeing People Die/
Sadness Plagued These Streets, Nothing Like Seeing Mothers Cry/
Babies Left without A Parent, We Droppin Our Tears./
But We Never Solve our Own Problems, We Must drop Our fears/
Society, Living in Notoriety, How Come We so Worried about Iraq/
If We Looked Upon Our Own Country's Needs, Would We worry of Attack?/

If We tried To Clean Up Our Streets, The Knowledge That We have In our Hands/
Patriotism, Propoganda, Nationalism, Deleted From Our Books, Truth in Our Lands/
7 Is Perfect, 2007 Years after The Birth of Our Lord In Human Consumption/
From The Virgin Mary, Our Mother, From her Birth To Her Assumption/
When We Our Lifted To God, Will He Wash Our Pain Away, Put Us In Purgatory/
Original Sin, And keeps Going Worse and Worse,Like Sequels and Cliffhanging Stories/
But Our Fathers and Mothers Who Were Plagued with Birth without Grace/
And Problems of Third World Countries , Whose Plagues We Can Relate/

On 2007 I Fear I Predict, The Heavens and Earth's Evil, will Part Up and Split/
Good From Bad, Bad From Worse, 7 Is Perfect, But Our Sixth Year will be Worse/

6 IS The Evil,The Devil, We all Must soon Fear, /
Jesus' Second Return,To Kill Him/
He Might Be among Us, Maybe He's Already Here/

N.D.eva 10-04-03 06:38 AM

"World Was Created in 6 days, imperfect/
The Seventh God Rested, Was it worth it?/"

thought these opening lines were ill, but as i read on i sort of lost interest through the verses, cos it aint really my scene, but the vocab and flow was good, good to see a theme, quite original

"Society, Living in Notoriety, How Come We so Worried about Iraq/
If We Looked Upon Our Own Country's Needs, Would We worry of Attack?/"

these lines were tighter than a nuns twat...likin it

overall it was a decent drop...keep spittin dawg

Accelerate 10-04-03 09:07 AM

Word...Looking for more Feeding...

Menik 10-04-03 04:59 PM

yeah this was a pretty good piece i thought, it made a good read, it flowed pretty well through out the piece, you had good vocab, the content was good, overall it was a good piece i thought, keep dropping.

Mag... 10-04-03 05:33 PM

Do you always say that Masta C????

Anyways... yea this kinda rocked... except some of the rhymes would have to tinkered.... "fear/appeal" "untrue/proof" "words/sword"
maybe you spit this with some weird accent that makes it work...or.. you never said this aloud....

{Peace}

Da_Renegade 10-04-03 06:04 PM

this was a good piece, but like ^^ the man above mee said, that part didnt rhyme, alteast to me

good shit tho

Accelerate 10-05-03 06:42 PM

Sube Parriba Maricone

K-Dubb 10-05-03 06:54 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Magnificent
Do you always say that Masta C????

Anyways... yea this kinda rocked... except some of the rhymes would have to tinkered.... "fear/appeal" "untrue/proof" "words/sword"
maybe you spit this with some weird accent that makes it work...or.. you never said this aloud....


Yea that's all he says, god damn annoying too, but ya cant stop it i guess.

As for tha drop, I liked it, i didnt like some o tha rhymes tho' but thats me i guess, I pretty much agree wit what Mag. said.

{Love}

Accelerate 10-05-03 09:53 PM

Word....I liked My Drop too, Actually Im'a Try To Use This Style and Improve on it, Uppin.


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