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Believe
You know you can "acheive"
So why not "believe" I know it may "decieve" But you were ment to "recieve" Your staring at all your "dreams" But all you hear are "screams" Trying to drown out all the "teams" Pushing you self to "extremes" Glory is at your "door" But first you must go through the "war" Once you get there you will "soar" and people will see what you stand "for" Just a lill something id share *HOT ICE |
i like the possitive message in this
4 me it was a little 2 simple even though it works how it is seemed very short due to it been simple basic rhyming scheme contributes to that keep posting |
I feel you on that one Ice, to me it was very nice. Nice little short poem. Last 4 lines means a lot to people, or it should anyway.
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Yeah i agree this was a good piece, it made a good read, it flowed pretty well through out the piece, it had a good meaning i coud relate too, and your content was good, overall it was a good piece, keep up the good work.
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