Transmogrify vs Royal
 

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usuall voting rules
no biting
no feeding
you spit first
check in first
i have 15 mins to spit afta you
i check in afta you


go ahead...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8324#post818324
yo can yall vote on that battle your honest vote thx 1

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ayo im in lets get this ill shit going

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About 15 lines and I'm rusty...like ya verbal hinge
I can tell your spittin fire cause...ya rhymes are singed
Ya chance of livin is none... just like a fish outa water
And ya punches are old...like the population of Florida
Been here for 12 days and as far as rap...he hasn't learned
Even if he was a waiter...I wouldn't be gettin served
As for the rules...I spit first I allowed him to choose
But exactly like the Clippers...he's still gonna lose
Haven't battled in weeks...but I'm still matching up
Cause this battle is the only way...you suck is a trump
Such a loser...when the internet goes out he cries
He has no life...so when the computer shuts off he dies


12

yep

Diff Style....

Im 'Scopin-Kids' So Listen Up Dawg Cuz My 'Smokin-Spits' Will Leave You Toasted And With 'Broken-Diskz'..//

Left Him With 'Open-Hits' Battling Me Is A 'Spoken-Risk' Its Like Hes Spittin Crap Cuz Hes 'Flowin-Shit'..//

Killa Bar
Snatch Out His Pupils So He Want Witness A Glance Of The Rippin Across This Abuse l Like Kidnappers Trackin His Moves..//
Mistaking Me For An Newbie N Watch Ya Loose Like Anerexic Prositutes Leavin The Pussy 2 Look Like Even Showing Evidence Want Spot His Clues...//


Like Ancient Culture's Yall Get Ya 'Flesh-Beat' No Point For Your Existence The Admin Should 'Press-Delete'..//

All Fake Rappers Originate @ The 'Down-Souf' His Spits Are Jokes Like If He Had A 'Clown-Mouth'...//

Ya Rap Skillz Have Vanished Like The 'Brown-Alf' Ill Be Like Beater Dads And Knock The 'Brown-Out'..//

Ya Mentally Challenged Kid Ya Never Should Answer My 'Call-Outs' Cuz Yall Be Like Soldiers And 'Fall-Out'...//

Finished....

Thinking Yall Win With 'Small-Douts' You've Been 'Mauled-Out' U Found Out What Defeat Is 'All-About'..//

lets get some votes nice battle
leave a link and we'll check it out

dis battle was one sided

the first guy was waaaay elementary

About 15 lines and I'm rusty...like ya verbal hinge
I can tell your spittin fire cause...ya rhymes are singed
^^^^^ LMAO, the guy just gave Royal props...........retarded line

Ya chance of livin is none... just like a fish outa water
And ya punches are old...like the population of Florida
^^ the florida was good
Been here for 12 days and as far as rap...he hasn't learned
Even if he was a waiter...I wouldn't be gettin served
^^^^^^^ played line
As for the rules...I spit first I allowed him to choose
But exactly like the Clippers...he's still gonna lose
Haven't battled in weeks...but I'm still matching up
Cause this battle is the only way...you suck is a trump
Such a loser...when the internet goes out he cries
He has no life...so when the computer shuts off he dies

overall a weak verse

Royal use more wisely wit wordplays and shit
Hes Spittin Crap Cuz Hes 'Flowin-Shit'..// <<< that's played out tho
his killer bars really killed it

vote = Royal

much much much harder hitting disses, if u battling noobs like him Royal u'll get no respect

is anyone here a registered voter? (talknig about Elite front lines)



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I normally don't bitch about votes but you obviously don't know what singed means you fuckin noob I don't give shit you voted for him but you vote wack as fuck

do me a favor and elevate.........................hahaha........dont get mad cuz Royal is about to merk u........

ight breakdown...

About 15 lines and I'm rusty...like ya verbal hinge
I can tell your spittin fire cause...ya rhymes are singed

Not even a punch more of a comliment if u ask me


Ya chance of livin is none... just like a fish outa water
And ya punches are old...like the population of Florida

No flow... since when does water and Florida rhyme? lol but not a bad meta

Been here for 12 days and as far as rap...he hasn't learned
Even if he was a waiter...I wouldn't be gettin served

First line is a filler second is played

Royal...

Stop usin these thing...... "s... //... and - and bold letters...... it's herbish and newbish.... and don't stretch ya lines...... keep em short and sweet...... but props cuz ur verse was sick

Vote: Royal

wow, im not the only one who thought that line was more of a compliment lololol

retard, Transformer or wuteva ur name is jes accept da votes and feedback and elevate

lol thanks fer votes cdrama and trans should end this beef in a battle er even slip lol nah it up to them but lol uppin dis battle 1

Breakdown

Punches=Royal
Personals=Royal
Structure=Trans
Complexity=Royal
Creativity=Royal
Vocabulary=Royal
Multis=Royal
Wordplay=Royal

Overall=Royal

uppin dis battle 2
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