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Khlorawkz 10-04-03 08:33 PM

Skillz
 
yo yo yo i'd like to dedicate this mad rhyme to my daddy and my mammy. they waz always their fo' me when i needed to be bailed out tha joint and when i didnt have any way to feed my baby cuz i sold my food stampz and bought a bag of mary j. so dis iz fo my daddy and my mammy. peace yo yo

yo yo yo. i crack you in you skull
you hyped on 40's, i'm drinkin red bull
sports drink, like tha gatorade
yo is cheap like a made for tv movie
low budget, your girls ass so ugly i wont even touch it
i dark like chocolate
i think i'm gonna fudge it
your dirty ink
i think i'm gonna smudge it
kill demons with my lazer beam
LOOK OUT!!!!! thingz aint whut they seem
KRAFT like cheeze
you is ugly skeez
you never seen skillz like these


oooooh. sorry record execs!!! i've already been contacted by def jux and i've promised them 2 lps..sorry peace

K-Dubb 10-04-03 08:53 PM

poor vocab, seems like your tryin to battle wit someone. work on structure a lot, keep droppin tho.


oooooh. sorry record execs!!! i've already been contacted by def jux and i've promised them 2 lps..sorry peace

^^And, wtf is up with that last thing you said?

Mag... 10-04-03 09:07 PM

I have to agree...with K on this...

hey man do you think your parents would enjoy this whack crap...?

The only way this could be even remotely good is if you told me this was a free...but it's likely not... so... yea....ummm... well if i have to says one thing it's that you need a rhyming scheme...

P.S. watch your rhymes period... "Skull/Bull" no rhyme there man...

{Peace}


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