Jewels Pawned (Diamond Mindz Diss)
 

Pawned Jewels (Diamond Mindz Diss)

Claiming to be wise but are fools/
Pawning these cheap crystal jewels//
Naming names from Diamond Mindz/
Cuttin them up with these simplistic linez//
Startin this crew massacre from head to toe/
After this they'll be the crew known as unknown//
Goin for the head, killin bizzurk dead, him lookin for his crew but they fled/
Staining DM's forum red, from the bloodshed, bizzurk needing help from the med...//
Bizzurk left for dead now choppin the neck/
Who's next to get wrecked? Artic q vexed//
Knowing his days are numbered, knowing that after this he'll be left in an eternal slumba/
Like Jesus you'll be served like this was your last suppa//
So is it ArticQlit or Orbiit? caught like a mouse/
Burnin this lyrical house, choppin artic's & orbiit's spouse//
DM's chest blown away as the bullets "Ricochet"/
Oops No vest, too bad you failed this test and your left on the floor to lay//
Reload'n the clip, takin a sip/
following the abc's for alpha bet//
Look'n at him with respect as I turn the gun away/
listenin to audible scream as I let my tek spray//
Biggie C ~ Cant see me, in this lyrical sea/
As I leave him be...Syke, as he gets a visit from my 9 mili...//
Biggie C bleeding ~ Com running to his aid ~ As Biggie C begins to see Com's life begin to fade/
As I put the gun down and let Com taste the blade//
Dope Words got it made as he is the mod/
Not caring as I reveal him as a fraud//
I am moving at an unstoppable pace/
already winning without even starting this race//
Remix N Clipse not safe/
Just giving them a sample, a taste//
Of events to come/
Tu Cent Standing still ~ Stunned//
Diamond Mindz has been lyrically raped/
With all of their leaders speechless, with their mouths taped//
They call me the Diamond cutter/
Speeking the truth, did I stutter//
Bring'n justice as a crew neutralizer/
Beating diamonds as a Miner Brutalizer//

If some of your names were left out its cause I dont think your important...
The only one of you's that I respect is Alpha bet

That's a big sig...

ummm.... i don't know the background behind this dis but.... yea it probably would be much better in audio... cuz it read kinda badly (structure-wise)

unnh..... welll... ermmm... i think i liked it?

{Peace}

It is better in audio its just thatmy comp has a virus that I cant seem to delete so my comp is F**** and I cant use my audio equip

an okay drop, just a bit too basic..........try spicing it up a bit more

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It Was Shit Like You Are Hurb . .

^ Word . . .
LoL Ur Wakk

^word
and you wonder why we rejected you not once but twice, lol

I was only reject once first of all second as the first line said very simplistic rhymes why do I need to use complex linez when you and diamond midz are just a joke... :)
Just like Artic Q lit... or should I say orbiit???

^^lol word..

Well, it had a nice flow, you used good vocab, and you had a lot of punches in there. The only cons are the lack of metas and multies. But it was a good drop

if you can return the favor-

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83610