Just Listen
 

I gotta stay on top to many enemies wan't me dead/
When it's my turn to go, let it be one shot into my head/
Not wishing death early but if it comes i'll be prepared/
cremate my body all of a sudden my ashes begin to dissapear/
My sorrow swallow my pride and i keep my head up/
But all my niggaz seem to die dropping like some cigarrete butts/
These troubles hunting me like a lost soul need a place to go/
Wherever I go it turns cold reaching up a bove all of these demons they pull me down/
Feeling helpless all the kids turn away with a frown/
Pushing me away can't forgive my mom for giving me away/
But It's ok the man you see will be alright today/
Sometimes i wander was i ready to be in this world/
I pray to god show me heaven doors and let me in/

That's pretty deep. I would recommend adding more wordplay, metas and multies to your piece, to give it a good flow. Otherwise good drop, you'll elevate soon enough as long as you stay active.

Yeah this was a pretty decent piece, you should try to even all your lines out but sometimes it happens its cool, your flow was pretty good, could have used some internals to make it flow better but it was good, and i agree with using more wordplay and metas it would help the flow out and make it more interesting to read, but it was a pretty decent drop, keep dropping.