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FREESTYLE (feed back appreicated)
yo my nigga dont come at me like you hard give yo pussy a shave/
im gonna make like dmx and jet-li and cradle you to your grave/ dont try to hate me nigga haters just get off my dick/ befo i leave you broke and in a splint like a bootleg mike vick/ nigga i know you on my nuts with me you have a fasination/ get on my bad side and ill be standin over you at yo assassination/ tryin to battle me is just stupid simply put its not smart/ ill leave you empty handed like you got caught tryin to steal from k-mart/ like mcdonalds i love to see bitches smile ive been doin this for awhile/ this is my last bar i am done wit my lil freestyle/ please give me some feedback on this. dont sleep |
not bad, just seems a little slow. You kind of deliver it the same though. Good ideas though
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it was alright.. your lines were very simple and you need more word play and try not to end freestyles with this is my last line so im done.. its just a big ass filler.. its alrigght you got some potential just keep on slanging.. but u need to elevate a bit first ..
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thanks for the feedback my niggas. holla
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